Glint In Day's Sun

lavender tendrils 
ripples on depthless water
deer snaps his head up

5/24/2018
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Callus Avatar
May 28, 2018 at 5:07 PM
What a beautiful image you have created, Eve! But I'm not surprised...after all you use pen and brush with equal ease:) Hugs // paul
Breidenthal Avatar
May 28, 2018 at 4:54 AM
Fantastic and simply super! -JWE
Gentry Avatar
May 27, 2018 at 5:39 PM
A great haiku!
Devonshire Avatar
May 26, 2018 at 4:59 PM
You have created a beautiful and clear image, Eve. Excellent haiku!
Horn Avatar
May 25, 2018 at 7:09 AM
Give me a hint as to where was the glint, God has for me and He knows what it meant.
Rodrigues Avatar
May 25, 2018 at 6:44 AM
Great one, Eve! A fave!
Malik Avatar
May 25, 2018 at 6:28 AM
Lovely <3
Pandit Avatar
May 25, 2018 at 5:48 AM
WOW! I see the deer in front of me..sign of a great depiction.
Gauthier Avatar
May 25, 2018 at 5:09 AM
Beautiful imagery, Eve.
Cunningham Avatar
May 25, 2018 at 1:52 AM
Loved it, someone stepped on a twig. Tom.
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