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Glimpses of Summer 2020

willow trees frolic waltzing in summer music-- concert of hatchlings stretching necks and bills scanning rivers, spreading wings-- blue herons catch fish June 25, 2020 Placed 1st: Summer haiku poetry contest Syllables: 5,7,5 (howmanysylables.com) Sponsor: Tania Kitchin

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Date: 6/30/2020 2:53:00 PM
Back to congratulate you on your top spot dear friend! Blessings :) Keep writing and inspiring.
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Date: 6/29/2020 8:50:00 PM
Congratulations, Vijay!
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 6/30/2020 12:05:00 PM
Thank you, Kim--much appreciate.
Date: 6/29/2020 3:03:00 PM
A great Haiku. Congratulations on your win. This is well deserved.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 6/30/2020 12:05:00 PM
Much appreciate--thank you.
Date: 6/29/2020 1:24:00 PM
Vijay, lovely summer imagery. I loved the concert of hatchlings! Congratulations on your #1 placement in the haiku contest ~ John
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 6/30/2020 12:04:00 PM
Thank you John--much appreciate.
Date: 6/29/2020 11:54:00 AM
A beautiful rendering you have composed, Vijay, my compliments for your worthy 1st Place win -- Aloha~@wk
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Date: 6/29/2020 1:01:00 PM
Much appreciate William--many thanks.
Date: 6/29/2020 9:23:00 AM
This is a magical little slice of summer Vijay. I love the sounds of "concert of hatchlings" Congrats on your top win!
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 6/29/2020 1:01:00 PM
Thank you Jeanne--much appreciate.
Date: 6/29/2020 6:13:00 AM
Wow wonderful imagery sir. Congratulations on you top win:-) Keep writing .Keep inspiring.:-) Take care.Warm regards~Deepa
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 6/29/2020 7:41:00 AM
Thank you--much appreciate.
Date: 6/29/2020 2:39:00 AM
Back with congrats Vijay. Tom
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 6/29/2020 6:07:00 AM
Thank you Tom--much appreciate.
Date: 6/29/2020 1:52:00 AM
concert of hatchlings..wow.. Great imagery Vijay.. Congratulation on your top win..
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 6/29/2020 6:06:00 AM
Much appreciate Jenish--many thanks.
Date: 6/28/2020 7:46:00 PM
Your Haiku gave life to a willow. Nice win, Vijay.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 6/29/2020 6:06:00 AM
Thank you for your visit and kind remarks, Jenna--much appreciate.
Date: 6/28/2020 5:00:00 PM
What a beautiful haiku, Vijay:-) A gem worthy of a first place win, for sure. Heartiest congratulations on your win!
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 6/29/2020 6:05:00 AM
Thank you for the compliments Edward--much appreciate the kind remarks--many thanks.
Date: 6/28/2020 4:34:00 PM
lovely summer imagery, i adore seeing the herons when I'm on my walks by the sea, many congratulations on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 6/29/2020 6:05:00 AM
So very kind of you, Jan--much appreciate ---many thanks
Date: 6/28/2020 4:20:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, Vijay, very the olden poets. Hugs Eve
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 6/29/2020 6:03:00 AM
Thank you Eve--much appreciate your visit and comments.
Date: 6/28/2020 3:43:00 PM
Congratulations Vijay on your first place win, beautifully descriptive, love "concert of hatchlings"!
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 6/29/2020 6:03:00 AM
Much appreciate Tania your kind remarks. Thank you for holding contests.
Date: 6/28/2020 12:52:00 AM
Both of these are beautiful Vijay. A summer delight! Blessings xxoo
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 6/28/2020 2:44:00 PM
Thank you Connie--much appreciate.
Date: 6/27/2020 3:10:00 PM
Two delightful summer images, Vijay! Movement very noticeable. Regards // paul
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 6/27/2020 5:42:00 PM
Thank you Paul--much appreciate. Regards.
Date: 6/27/2020 1:06:00 PM
Beautiful summer images. Vijay! Willows are one of my favorite trees, and I love herons, too. GL in the contest. Blessings, Rhonda xx
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 6/27/2020 1:27:00 PM
Much appreciate Rhonda--many thanks.
Date: 6/27/2020 11:54:00 AM
A beautiful piece Vijay; good luck in the contest!
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 6/27/2020 1:26:00 PM
Thank you MLK--much appreciate.
Date: 6/27/2020 3:34:00 AM
Very engaging and endearing poem, my friend... 'Concert of hatchlings'... great line !
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 6/27/2020 11:12:00 AM
So very kind of you my friend--much appreciate--many thanks, Lawrence.
Date: 6/26/2020 10:38:00 PM
I love herons... such beautiful imagery in these haikus Vijay... wonderful penning...best wishes in the contest! hugs
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 6/27/2020 11:12:00 AM
Much appreciate my friend--many thanks, Sandy.
Date: 6/26/2020 3:09:00 PM
Oh, these haiku are wonderful, Vijay! I especially love "concert of hatchlings" as it brings such a sweet image to mind. Best wishes in the contest and thank you for your kind email. Hugs, Carolyn
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 6/27/2020 11:11:00 AM
Thank you my friend--much appreciate--many thanks.
Date: 6/26/2020 2:41:00 PM
As usual, another beauty from your notes..concert indeed
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 6/26/2020 4:44:00 PM
So very kind of you Debjani--much appreciate your visit and kind remarks--many thanks.
Date: 6/26/2020 2:39:00 PM
Nice magery in this one...Well done
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 6/26/2020 4:43:00 PM
Thank you Arturo--much appreciate.
Date: 6/26/2020 7:04:00 AM
Symphony of life's beauty in Haiku nutshells! Superbly written, my friend Vijay!
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 6/26/2020 9:04:00 AM
Thank you my friend--much appreciate.
Date: 6/25/2020 11:07:00 PM
Summertime is a time of warmth, magic and beautiful moments. You paint such vivid images with your words. I feel the wind upon my skin. :) Brandy
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 6/26/2020 7:01:00 AM
Always a joy to read you comments--much appreciate, Brandy--many thanks.
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