Vijay Pandit Poet Haiku

Glimpses of Summer 2020

willow trees frolic
waltzing in summer music--
concert of hatchlings

stretching necks and bills
scanning rivers, spreading wings--
blue herons catch fish

June 25, 2020
Placed 1st: Summer haiku poetry contest
Syllables: 5,7,5 (howmanysylables.com)
Sponsor: Tania Kitchin

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Aditi Mishra June 30, 2020 at 2:53 PM Back to congratulate you on your top spot dear friend! Blessings :) Keep writing and inspiring.

Kim Rodrigues June 29, 2020 at 8:50 PM Congratulations, Vijay! Vijay Pandit June 30, 2020 at 12:05 PM Thank you, Kim--much appreciate.

Funom Makama June 29, 2020 at 3:03 PM A great Haiku. Congratulations on your win. This is well deserved. Vijay Pandit June 30, 2020 at 12:05 PM Much appreciate--thank you.

John Watt June 29, 2020 at 1:24 PM Vijay, lovely summer imagery. I loved the concert of hatchlings! Congratulations on your #1 placement in the haiku contest ~ John Vijay Pandit June 30, 2020 at 12:04 PM Thank you John--much appreciate.

William Kelii Kekaula June 29, 2020 at 11:54 AM A beautiful rendering you have composed, Vijay, my compliments for your worthy 1st Place win -- Aloha~@wk Vijay Pandit June 29, 2020 at 1:01 PM Much appreciate William--many thanks.

Jeanne Mcgee June 29, 2020 at 9:23 AM This is a magical little slice of summer Vijay. I love the sounds of "concert of hatchlings" Congrats on your top win! Vijay Pandit June 29, 2020 at 1:01 PM Thank you Jeanne--much appreciate.

V. Deepa June 29, 2020 at 6:13 AM Wow wonderful imagery sir. Congratulations on you top win:-) Keep writing .Keep inspiring.:-) Take care.Warm regards~Deepa Vijay Pandit June 29, 2020 at 7:41 AM Thank you--much appreciate.

Tom Cunningham June 29, 2020 at 2:39 AM Back with congrats Vijay. Tom Vijay Pandit June 29, 2020 at 6:07 AM Thank you Tom--much appreciate.

Jenish Somadas June 29, 2020 at 1:52 AM concert of hatchlings..wow.. Great imagery Vijay.. Congratulation on your top win.. Vijay Pandit June 29, 2020 at 6:06 AM Much appreciate Jenish--many thanks.

Jenna Logan June 28, 2020 at 7:46 PM Your Haiku gave life to a willow. Nice win, Vijay. Vijay Pandit June 29, 2020 at 6:06 AM Thank you for your visit and kind remarks, Jenna--much appreciate.

Edward Ibeh June 28, 2020 at 5:00 PM What a beautiful haiku, Vijay:-) A gem worthy of a first place win, for sure. Heartiest congratulations on your win! Vijay Pandit June 29, 2020 at 6:05 AM Thank you for the compliments Edward--much appreciate the kind remarks--many thanks.

Jan Allison June 28, 2020 at 4:34 PM lovely summer imagery, i adore seeing the herons when I'm on my walks by the sea, many congratulations on your win:-) hugs Jan xx Vijay Pandit June 29, 2020 at 6:05 AM So very kind of you, Jan--much appreciate ---many thanks

Eve Roper June 28, 2020 at 4:20 PM Congratulations on your win, Vijay, very the olden poets. Hugs Eve Vijay Pandit June 29, 2020 at 6:03 AM Thank you Eve--much appreciate your visit and comments.

Tania Kitchin June 28, 2020 at 3:43 PM Congratulations Vijay on your first place win, beautifully descriptive, love "concert of hatchlings"! Vijay Pandit June 29, 2020 at 6:03 AM Much appreciate Tania your kind remarks. Thank you for holding contests.

Connie Marcum Wong June 28, 2020 at 12:52 AM Both of these are beautiful Vijay. A summer delight! Blessings xxoo Vijay Pandit June 28, 2020 at 2:44 PM Thank you Connie--much appreciate.

Paul Callus June 27, 2020 at 3:10 PM Two delightful summer images, Vijay! Movement very noticeable. Regards // paul Vijay Pandit June 27, 2020 at 5:42 PM Thank you Paul--much appreciate. Regards.

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders June 27, 2020 at 1:06 PM Beautiful summer images. Vijay! Willows are one of my favorite trees, and I love herons, too. GL in the contest. Blessings, Rhonda xx Vijay Pandit June 27, 2020 at 1:27 PM Much appreciate Rhonda--many thanks.

M. L. Kiser June 27, 2020 at 11:54 AM A beautiful piece Vijay; good luck in the contest! Vijay Pandit June 27, 2020 at 1:26 PM Thank you MLK--much appreciate.

Lawrence Sharp June 27, 2020 at 3:34 AM Very engaging and endearing poem, my friend... 'Concert of hatchlings'... great line ! Vijay Pandit June 27, 2020 at 11:12 AM So very kind of you my friend--much appreciate--many thanks, Lawrence.

Sandra Adams June 26, 2020 at 10:38 PM I love herons... such beautiful imagery in these haikus Vijay... wonderful penning...best wishes in the contest! hugs Vijay Pandit June 27, 2020 at 11:12 AM Much appreciate my friend--many thanks, Sandy.

Carolyn Devonshire June 26, 2020 at 3:09 PM Oh, these haiku are wonderful, Vijay! I especially love "concert of hatchlings" as it brings such a sweet image to mind. Best wishes in the contest and thank you for your kind email. Hugs, Carolyn Vijay Pandit June 27, 2020 at 11:11 AM Thank you my friend--much appreciate--many thanks.

Debjani Mitra June 26, 2020 at 2:41 PM As usual, another beauty from your notes..concert indeed Vijay Pandit June 26, 2020 at 4:44 PM So very kind of you Debjani--much appreciate your visit and kind remarks--many thanks.

Arturo Michael June 26, 2020 at 2:39 PM Nice magery in this one...Well done Vijay Pandit June 26, 2020 at 4:43 PM Thank you Arturo--much appreciate.

Demetrios Trifiatis June 26, 2020 at 7:04 AM Symphony of life's beauty in Haiku nutshells! Superbly written, my friend Vijay! Vijay Pandit June 26, 2020 at 9:04 AM Thank you my friend--much appreciate.

Brandy Nicole June 25, 2020 at 11:07 PM Summertime is a time of warmth, magic and beautiful moments. You paint such vivid images with your words. I feel the wind upon my skin. :) Brandy Vijay Pandit June 26, 2020 at 7:01 AM Always a joy to read you comments--much appreciate, Brandy--many thanks.

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