Glimpse of You

Behold my threshold
I saw a face, stunning, lovely 
An angel with eyes, diamond glittered
throwing a light in the dark 
Pretty was her face, and divine her smile.

Saw her passing through for a while
My world stopped and smiled,
I got to see her and it was my luck
A gesture glued my lips and I was wild
After she left I am stuck.

Her brown eyes had everlasting story,
Tears rolling down the cheeks made them shine
She looked fresh even she was sad
Her lovely picture made me mad.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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August 17, 2013 at 10:41 PM
CONGRATULATIONS, SURAJIT, on having your poem featured this week........ Love ~SKAT~
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August 17, 2013 at 9:45 PM
Surajit, . Congratulations!!! It's nice to see your poem Featured on the soups Home Page, this past week :-) goodnight~ Luv* LINDA .....
Hamilton Avatar
August 15, 2013 at 5:58 AM
welcome to soup Surajit fine poem to start with congrats on being featured Shadow x smiles
A  Avatar
June 29, 2013 at 4:01 PM
Surajit, your first poem on the soup is excellent for the readers, Stopping by with a nice and sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. Hope you meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop by and say hello. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND"....... God Bless........... Hugs* SKAT
Dahal Avatar
July 5, 2013 at 12:06 AM
THanks a lot for the comment!! I would definitely give my best to meet the other poets out here..!!
Dawson Avatar
June 29, 2013 at 2:29 PM
An interesting twist on a love poem with a surprise ending!
Dahal Avatar
July 5, 2013 at 12:06 AM
Thanks a lot..!!
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