Get Your Premium Membership

Glimpse of You

Behold my threshold I saw a face, stunning, lovely An angel with eyes, diamond glittered throwing a light in the dark Pretty was her face, and divine her smile. Saw her passing through for a while My world stopped and smiled, I got to see her and it was my luck A gesture glued my lips and I was wild After she left I am stuck. Her brown eyes had everlasting story, Tears rolling down the cheeks made them shine She looked fresh even she was sad Her lovely picture made me mad.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 8/17/2013 10:41:00 PM
CONGRATULATIONS, SURAJIT, on having your poem featured this week........ Love ~SKAT~
Login to Reply
Date: 8/17/2013 9:45:00 PM
Surajit, . Congratulations!!! It's nice to see your poem Featured on the soups Home Page, this past week :-) goodnight~ Luv* LINDA .....
Login to Reply
Date: 8/15/2013 5:58:00 AM
welcome to soup Surajit fine poem to start with congrats on being featured Shadow x smiles
Login to Reply
Date: 6/29/2013 4:01:00 PM
Surajit, your first poem on the soup is excellent for the readers, Stopping by with a nice and sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. Hope you meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop by and say hello. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND"....... God Bless........... Hugs* SKAT
Login to Reply
Dahal Avatar
Surajit Dahal
Date: 7/5/2013 12:06:00 AM
THanks a lot for the comment!! I would definitely give my best to meet the other poets out here..!!
Date: 6/29/2013 2:29:00 PM
An interesting twist on a love poem with a surprise ending!
Login to Reply
Dahal Avatar
Surajit Dahal
Date: 7/5/2013 12:06:00 AM
Thanks a lot..!!

Book: Reflection on the Important Things