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Glimpse of Beaches

gently sloping strip
~ waves and sunset to ogle
    balmy breeze persists

22-5-2020

~DEEPA~

Note:'Nature Haiku'Poetry contest 
Sponsor:Regina Riddle

Copyright © V. Deepa | Year Posted 2020

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Krish Radhakrishna

May 23, 2020 at 1:16 PM

Near the Arabian Sea, the roaring sea and that wind blowing across! I like this! Warm unlike in UK when it freezes you to the bone!

May 24, 2020 at 2:34 AM

Oh..yes it's an amazing feel sir.:-)I had been to few beaches at Goa and those precious feelings & memories triggered my thoughts to write this now.

Swetha Vangaveti

May 22, 2020 at 5:23 PM

Nice imagery!! :)

May 23, 2020 at 6:36 AM

Hi.Thankyou for your review:-) Take care.

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

May 22, 2020 at 8:43 AM

Mmm, a haiku to dive into. Wonderful. My best to you in the contest Deepa! xomo

May 22, 2020 at 10:33 AM

Thanks a bunch mam for always wishing me in the contest.:-) I am pleased that you liked it.Take care:-):-)

May 22, 2020 at 6:04 AM

Such soothing metaphors that display colours of a sunset at beach. All the best! :)

May 22, 2020 at 10:30 AM

Yes. Tried a little to describe beach. Thankyou very much for your warm appreciations everytime.:-) Wish you good luck too.:-)Take care

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