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Glimpse of Beaches

gently sloping strip ~ waves and sunset to ogle balmy breeze persists 22-5-2020 ~DEEPA~ Note:'Nature Haiku'Poetry contest Sponsor:Regina Riddle

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Krish Radhakrishna

Date: 5/23/2020 1:16:00 PM

Near the Arabian Sea, the roaring sea and that wind blowing across! I like this! Warm unlike in UK when it freezes you to the bone!

V. Deepa
Date: 5/24/2020 2:34:00 AM

Oh..yes it's an amazing feel sir.:-)I had been to few beaches at Goa and those precious feelings & memories triggered my thoughts to write this now.

Swetha Vangaveti

Date: 5/22/2020 5:23:00 PM

Nice imagery!! :)

V. Deepa
Date: 5/23/2020 6:36:00 AM

Hi.Thankyou for your review:-) Take care.

Maureen Mcgreavy

Date: 5/22/2020 8:43:00 AM

Mmm, a haiku to dive into. Wonderful. My best to you in the contest Deepa! xomo

V. Deepa
Date: 5/22/2020 10:33:00 AM

Thanks a bunch mam for always wishing me in the contest.:-) I am pleased that you liked it.Take care:-):-)

Aditi Mishra

Date: 5/22/2020 6:04:00 AM

Such soothing metaphors that display colours of a sunset at beach. All the best! :)

V. Deepa
Date: 5/22/2020 10:30:00 AM

Yes. Tried a little to describe beach. Thankyou very much for your warm appreciations everytime.:-) Wish you good luck too.:-)Take care