Glide

Let me glide with you Let me truly feel free Let us fly through white fluffiness Let us skim the vast sea Let us enjoy the warmth of a days sunshine Let us inhale the mystery and beauty of night Let us eternally glide together Let us for evermore be in full flight

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Kim Rodrigues

Date: 6/7/2023 5:38:00 AM

Love how you can write about joy and pain and leave us feeling. In this poem we inhale the mystery and beauty of night. The glide could be with life itself, romantic, friendship, introspective… I love how each person can find themselves… So lovely, Deb!

Deb M
Date: 6/9/2023 3:04:00 AM

Aww thankyou Kim for your lovely comment! Debx

Paige Hind

Date: 6/4/2023 3:41:00 PM

Beautiful poem!

Deb M
Date: 6/4/2023 5:32:00 PM

Thankyou Paige! Debx

Shirley Hawkins

Date: 6/3/2023 2:13:00 AM

What a lovely thought. Take care, Shirley XX

Deb M
Date: 6/4/2023 5:31:00 PM

Thanks Shirley! Debx

Bill Baker

Date: 6/2/2023 2:14:00 PM

Sounds great to me, Deb. Fly on! Nice rhyming, my dear friend. Smiles ~ Blessing Bill

Deb M
Date: 6/2/2023 10:03:00 PM

Thankyou BBH….l always enjoy getting your thoughts on my poems….l value them! Thankyou my friend! Debx

Arlo Parker

Date: 6/2/2023 10:58:00 AM

Your written thots lift us high in a provocative eternal fashion. Thanks, Deb. ~;o)

Deb M
Date: 6/2/2023 10:01:00 PM

Aww thanks Arlo as does your comments and thots to me! Appreciated! Debx

Janice Canerdy

Date: 6/1/2023 9:00:00 PM

Deb, this is lovely--enthusiastic and inspiring. Janice

Deb M
Date: 6/2/2023 9:59:00 PM

Hi Janice….thankyou so much for such kind words! Debx

Gershon Wolf

Date: 6/1/2023 7:10:00 PM

This 'toughie' is ready for white and 'fluffy.' lol. And away we go! (Deja vu?!)

Deb M
Date: 6/1/2023 7:32:00 PM

I will glide over to you and off we go Big Bad!! Drop the “white n fluffy though” as it doesn't suit your BB persona!!! Ha….Debx

Sotto Poet

Date: 6/1/2023 9:48:00 AM

A magnificent piece of poetry that inspires one to soar alongside you. It evokes a sense of liberation, inviting us to float through the clouds and skim over the expansive ocean. Well done Deb.

Deb M
Date: 6/1/2023 7:36:00 PM

Lasaad you are too kind with your comments….I am so happy you like my poems as you are a master of poetry! It means a lot…..thankyou my friend! Debx

Tom Cunningham

Date: 6/1/2023 9:46:00 AM

A very uplifting verse Deb. Tom

Deb M
Date: 6/1/2023 7:34:00 PM

Thanks so much my dearest Thomas Cunningham!! Deborah M x