Malabika Ray Choudhury Poet Footle

Gleeful

birds fly
                soar high

                doves croon
                pink moon

                lotus
                quivers

                sky night
                stars bright

                much glee 
                mind free



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Frances Schiavina September 2, 2021 at 7:43 AM Sincerest congratulations Malabika on delightful winning footles. Brilliant!

Krish Radhakrishna August 30, 2021 at 4:46 AM Mala, very well done! congrats on your well deserved win.

JC Brul August 29, 2021 at 7:02 AM Congratulations on your win in Brian's Footle Finale....This footle is awesome!

Eve Roper August 28, 2021 at 7:05 PM Great imagery , , congratulations in your win in Brian's Footle Malabika. Hugs Eve

Paula Goldsmith August 28, 2021 at 10:13 AM Congratulations on your win. A "Gleeful" Footle write. "Wonderful" Have a blessed day/weekend................. Malabika Ray Choudhury August 28, 2021 at 11:43 AM Thanks, Paula. Loved yours!

Andrea Dietrich August 28, 2021 at 9:58 AM Yours is so lovely!! Congrats, Mala. Malabika Ray Choudhury August 28, 2021 at 11:42 AM Thanks, Andrea. Yours is amazing!

Anitha Jayasankar August 28, 2021 at 7:59 AM A beautiful footle dear Mala... So well penned... Hugs... ~ Ani

Joanna Daniel August 28, 2021 at 1:26 AM Beautiful footles on the beauty of nature, Mala:)

Darlene De Beaulieu August 27, 2021 at 12:00 PM Hello Mala, very clever. love & Friendship Darlene Darlene De Beaulieu August 27, 2021 at 3:39 PM Hello Mala, I have never done one. You did it very well. Love & Friendship Darlene Malabika Ray Choudhury August 27, 2021 at 12:38 PM Thanks, Darlene. So glad you thought this clever! This is my first footle! Love and friendship ~ Mala