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Gleaming Rifle

The Gun was gleaming
Flashing in the summer sun
Confidence of steel

Copyright © Isaiah Zerbst | Year Posted 2013

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March 3, 2013 at 3:12 PM

Isaiah congrats on your win...David

February 27, 2013 at 9:28 PM

Nice job! I like this one!

February 27, 2013 at 12:55 PM

Congratulations on your win...David

Andrea Dietrich

February 26, 2013 at 4:27 PM

one for the gun lovers. And it's darn pretty haiku! Congrats.

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

February 26, 2013 at 10:20 AM

Many congratulations on your number 1 Isaiah xx

February 26, 2013 at 10:20 AM

Love it!Congrats on your top win Isaiah!

February 26, 2013 at 9:31 AM

Thanks for sharing your thoughts, congrad's Light & Love

Connie Gildersleeve

February 26, 2013 at 3:51 AM

Congratulations on your win. Powerful Haiku. Connie

February 25, 2013 at 11:00 PM

Many congrats Isaiah for this well deserved win.

Poet Destroyer A

February 25, 2013 at 8:59 PM

Isaiah, , Congratulations with your winning poem in Rix's "A "Gun"-o-ku " contest. Goodnight~ LINDA

February 25, 2013 at 7:45 PM

Powerful haiku, Isaiah! Superb juxto! Refer to my blog. Blessings! gwendolen

January 20, 2013 at 8:28 AM

Isaiah pity they get into the wrong hands...David

Ronny Madonsela

January 16, 2013 at 6:34 AM

Wow cool hiku

January 15, 2013 at 6:11 PM

unfortunately, this is so true! well said!

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