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Gleaming Rifle

The Gun was gleaming Flashing in the summer sun Confidence of steel

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 3/3/2013 3:12:00 PM
Isaiah congrats on your win...David
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Date: 2/27/2013 9:28:00 PM
Nice job! I like this one!
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Date: 2/27/2013 12:55:00 PM
Congratulations on your win...David
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Date: 2/26/2013 4:27:00 PM
one for the gun lovers. And it's darn pretty haiku! Congrats.
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Date: 2/26/2013 10:20:00 AM
Love it!Congrats on your top win Isaiah!
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Date: 2/26/2013 10:20:00 AM
Many congratulations on your number 1 Isaiah xx
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Date: 2/26/2013 9:31:00 AM
Thanks for sharing your thoughts, congrad's Light & Love
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Date: 2/26/2013 3:51:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. Powerful Haiku. Connie
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Date: 2/25/2013 11:00:00 PM
Many congrats Isaiah for this well deserved win.
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Date: 2/25/2013 8:59:00 PM
Isaiah, , Congratulations with your winning poem in Rix's "A "Gun"-o-ku " contest. Goodnight~ LINDA
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Date: 2/25/2013 7:45:00 PM
Powerful haiku, Isaiah! Superb juxto! Refer to my blog. Blessings! gwendolen
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Date: 1/20/2013 8:28:00 AM
Isaiah pity they get into the wrong hands...David
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Date: 1/16/2013 6:34:00 AM
Wow cool hiku
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Date: 1/15/2013 6:11:00 PM
unfortunately, this is so true! well said!
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