Paul Callus Poet Haiku

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Glass Art

your elusive love

slips beyond my fragile grasp

       shattered emotions

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Joined Soup on: 22 Feb 2014
Contest: Glass Art by Skat A
Inspired by Glass Heart pict.

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John Michaels April 29, 2017 at 10:23 AM Incredible Haiku, Paul. Very impressive! Regards, John. Paul Callus April 29, 2017 at 3:39 PM So pleased you liked it, John...thank you! Regards // paul

Marquis Mc Mills-Cooper October 7, 2016 at 5:21 AM Best Haiku I've ever read. Simply put...Brilliant! MC Paul Callus October 8, 2016 at 3:05 PM Many thanks, MC; your complimentary comments are most encouraging! Regards // paul

Michael Dom July 20, 2016 at 12:44 PM this one is inspiring for me Paul Callus July 21, 2016 at 5:44 PM I like that you find inspiration through my humble words, Michael; thank you. Regards // paul

Andrea Dietrich June 2, 2016 at 8:39 PM gosh, how did I miss THIS one It is awesome, Paul. I think you are one of my favorite KU writers on Soup. Paul Callus June 3, 2016 at 8:38 AM You are very kind, Andrea:) Thank you! Pity the picture has now disappeared; I think my premium membership must have just run out! ~ Regards // paul

Bl Devnath June 2, 2016 at 2:40 PM Beautiful poem on glass art my lovely friend. Good luck with a 7. Loved always, bl Paul Callus June 2, 2016 at 4:22 PM Thank you BL. Your comments and high rating are appreciated. Best regards, my friend. // paul

Anne Rutherford May 30, 2016 at 12:34 PM Paul one of the best Haiku poems I have read . very meaningful. Anne. Paul Callus May 30, 2016 at 3:59 PM Many thanks, Anne. I believe this is the first time that we have crossed paths...pleased to make your acquaintance. Regards // paul

Arthur Vaso May 28, 2016 at 11:49 PM Wow, amazing Paul, I am shattered so to speak at your talent!! :) Paul Callus May 29, 2016 at 9:57 AM Love, like glass, can be very fragile, my friend...it's to be handled with care! Thank you for the positive reaction. ~ All the best // paul

Timothy Hicks May 28, 2016 at 11:42 AM I haven't read any of the others for this contest ... but man, this was excellent! Each line has a strong connection to the picture. Were I the judge, this would be a serious contender. Paul Callus May 29, 2016 at 9:54 AM Thank you Timothy. This took I minute to write and half an hour juggling words around! I take pleasure in reading and rereading, trying to make every word count, and getting each line to sing to me:) Only then do I post! Regards...paul

Probir Gupta May 27, 2016 at 9:48 PM Very rightly some say that poetry is imagery and you are excellent at it... so satisfying... Paul Callus May 28, 2016 at 8:08 AM Thank you for the lovely feedback, Probir...satisfaction for me, too! Regards // paul

Lenny Gazbowski May 27, 2016 at 8:40 PM strong imagery, Paul. Paul Callus May 28, 2016 at 7:58 AM Thank you Lenny. I have just read Leon's dedication to you...very lovely and touching. Leon is a true gentleman. Take care. // paul