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your elusive love slips beyond my fragile grasp shattered emotions - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - Joined Soup on: 22 Feb 2014 Contest: Glass Art by Skat A Inspired by Glass Heart pict.

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John Michaels

Date: 4/29/2017 10:23:00 AM

Incredible Haiku, Paul. Very impressive! Regards, John.

Paul Callus
Date: 4/29/2017 3:39:00 PM

So pleased you liked it, John...thank you! Regards // paul

Marquis Mc Mills-Cooper

Date: 10/7/2016 5:21:00 AM

Best Haiku I've ever read. Simply put...Brilliant! MC

Paul Callus
Date: 10/8/2016 3:05:00 PM

Many thanks, MC; your complimentary comments are most encouraging! Regards // paul

Michael Dom

Date: 7/20/2016 12:44:00 PM

this one is inspiring for me

Paul Callus
Date: 7/21/2016 5:44:00 PM

I like that you find inspiration through my humble words, Michael; thank you. Regards // paul

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/2/2016 8:39:00 PM

gosh, how did I miss THIS one It is awesome, Paul. I think you are one of my favorite KU writers on Soup.

Paul Callus
Date: 6/3/2016 8:38:00 AM

You are very kind, Andrea:) Thank you! Pity the picture has now disappeared; I think my premium membership must have just run out! ~ Regards // paul

Bl Devnath

Date: 6/2/2016 2:40:00 PM

Beautiful poem on glass art my lovely friend. Good luck with a 7. Loved always, bl

Paul Callus
Date: 6/2/2016 4:22:00 PM

Thank you BL. Your comments and high rating are appreciated. Best regards, my friend. // paul

Anne Rutherford

Date: 5/30/2016 12:34:00 PM

Paul one of the best Haiku poems I have read . very meaningful. Anne.

Paul Callus
Date: 5/30/2016 3:59:00 PM

Many thanks, Anne. I believe this is the first time that we have crossed paths...pleased to make your acquaintance. Regards // paul

Arthur Vaso

Date: 5/28/2016 11:49:00 PM

Wow, amazing Paul, I am shattered so to speak at your talent!! :)

Paul Callus
Date: 5/29/2016 9:57:00 AM

Love, like glass, can be very fragile, my friend...it's to be handled with care! Thank you for the positive reaction. ~ All the best // paul

Timothy Hicks

Date: 5/28/2016 11:42:00 AM

I haven't read any of the others for this contest ... but man, this was excellent! Each line has a strong connection to the picture. Were I the judge, this would be a serious contender.

Paul Callus
Date: 5/29/2016 9:54:00 AM

Thank you Timothy. This took I minute to write and half an hour juggling words around! I take pleasure in reading and rereading, trying to make every word count, and getting each line to sing to me:) Only then do I post! Regards...paul

Probir Gupta

Date: 5/27/2016 9:48:00 PM

Very rightly some say that poetry is imagery and you are excellent at it... so satisfying...

Paul Callus
Date: 5/28/2016 8:08:00 AM

Thank you for the lovely feedback, Probir...satisfaction for me, too! Regards // paul

Lenny Gazbowski

Date: 5/27/2016 8:40:00 PM

strong imagery, Paul.

Paul Callus
Date: 5/28/2016 7:58:00 AM

Thank you Lenny. I have just read Leon's dedication to you...very lovely and touching. Leon is a true gentleman. Take care. // paul