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Glad You'Re Gone

storming away
your absence leaves me
reaching for rainbows

5/16/12

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Hidden Sister

October 2, 2015 at 2:07 PM

I love this. I'm right in the moment knowing exactly who's walking too. J

Poet Destroyer A

February 7, 2013 at 10:34 AM

i guess,,, maybe you think your the only who stood under this cloud.... anyways... the best haiku of the day... pd

Carol Sunshine Brown

October 1, 2012 at 6:13 AM

Congratulations on your placement in P.D.'s "Rainbow Fun~" contest Susan. Love, Carol

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

September 29, 2012 at 8:53 PM

CONGRATS SUSAN ON A POIGNANT WRITE AND GLORIOUS WIN LUV .. RAINBOWS SPEAK LOUDLY LUV ..

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

September 29, 2012 at 8:34 AM

big congratulations Susan ,well done xx

Joseph May

September 29, 2012 at 5:06 AM

congrats on your win ....with this lovely gem

Poet Destroyer A

September 29, 2012 at 12:15 AM

Susan, I'm having tons of rainbow fun ;-) reading and congratulating all my colorful "Rainbow Fun" winners. A sweet congratulations, ,,thank you for inspiring the contest...goodnight~ xox~ PD

Ashesh Das

May 23, 2012 at 4:57 AM

Very nice haiku, Susan. Love it.

Painted Hunter

May 22, 2012 at 2:13 PM

A beautiful haiku! This is a winner for sure.

Carrie Richards

May 21, 2012 at 6:58 PM

Oh....I love this!!!! Love it!!

Ronny Madonsela

May 20, 2012 at 3:56 PM

wonderful haiku. Good luck on the contest.

Kathryn Collins

May 20, 2012 at 8:58 AM

Just perfect Susan.

Joann Grisetti

May 19, 2012 at 4:02 PM

Very nice turn in this haiku. Best of luck in the contest.

Gwendolen Song

May 17, 2012 at 7:45 PM

Are you sure you're not also NOT jumping up and down on the mattress too?....hahaha...this is grand! Love, Gwendolen

Gwendolen Song

May 17, 2012 at 7:45 PM

Are you sure you're not also NOT jumping up and down on the mattress too?....hahaha...this is grand! Love, Gwendolen

Nathan D.

May 17, 2012 at 5:00 PM

good luck in contest

Nathan D.

May 17, 2012 at 4:59 PM

good luck in contest

Elliott Bowe The Drunken Poet

May 17, 2012 at 8:23 AM

NOW THIS IS Superb!!!

Elliott Bowe The Drunken Poet

May 17, 2012 at 8:22 AM

NOW THIS IS Superb!!!

Anne-Lise Andresen

May 17, 2012 at 7:40 AM

A haiku poem can say alot B.E.Susan, well written. - oxox love Anne-Lise

Connie Marcum Wong

May 16, 2012 at 7:14 PM

A really beautiful haiku Susan. It should take top honors in the contest. Thanks for your comments on my work.

Sara Kendrick

May 16, 2012 at 6:30 PM

This is a wnner for sure..Enjoyed its creativity..Good luck in the contest..Thanks for stopping by..I appreciate the kind review of my work..Sara

Andrea Dietrich

May 16, 2012 at 5:29 PM

WOW, you did an awesome one, Truly, I love this, Susan

Poet Destroyer A

May 16, 2012 at 4:17 PM

Hi, Susan! Thank you for all the non-stop comments.. I'm home already ~again! :-( , I'm in a faraway state of mind right now. (lacking it all) Not a weekend here------------- maybe later I will stand tall... good luck in the contest... always~ The Poet Destroyer

Jack Horne

May 16, 2012 at 12:37 PM

clever and expressive haiku, Susan

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