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Glad You'Re Gone

storming away your absence leaves me reaching for rainbows 5/16/12

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Hidden Sister

Date: 10/2/2015 2:07:00 PM

I love this. I'm right in the moment knowing exactly who's walking too. J

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 2/7/2013 10:34:00 AM

i guess,,, maybe you think your the only who stood under this cloud.... anyways... the best haiku of the day... pd

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 10/1/2012 6:13:00 AM

Congratulations on your placement in P.D.'s "Rainbow Fun~" contest Susan. Love, Carol

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 9/29/2012 8:53:00 PM

CONGRATS SUSAN ON A POIGNANT WRITE AND GLORIOUS WIN LUV .. RAINBOWS SPEAK LOUDLY LUV ..

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 9/29/2012 8:34:00 AM

big congratulations Susan ,well done xx

Joseph May

Date: 9/29/2012 5:06:00 AM

congrats on your win ....with this lovely gem

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 9/29/2012 12:15:00 AM

Susan, I'm having tons of rainbow fun ;-) reading and congratulating all my colorful "Rainbow Fun" winners. A sweet congratulations, ,,thank you for inspiring the contest...goodnight~ xox~ PD

Ashesh Das

Date: 5/23/2012 4:57:00 AM

Very nice haiku, Susan. Love it.

Painted Hunter

Date: 5/22/2012 2:13:00 PM

A beautiful haiku! This is a winner for sure.

Carrie Richards

Date: 5/21/2012 6:58:00 PM

Oh....I love this!!!! Love it!!

Ronny Madonsela

Date: 5/20/2012 3:56:00 PM

wonderful haiku. Good luck on the contest.

Kathryn Collins

Date: 5/20/2012 8:58:00 AM

Just perfect Susan.

Joann Grisetti

Date: 5/19/2012 4:02:00 PM

Very nice turn in this haiku. Best of luck in the contest.

Gwendolen Song

Date: 5/17/2012 7:45:00 PM

Are you sure you're not also NOT jumping up and down on the mattress too?....hahaha...this is grand! Love, Gwendolen

Gwendolen Song

Date: 5/17/2012 7:45:00 PM

Are you sure you're not also NOT jumping up and down on the mattress too?....hahaha...this is grand! Love, Gwendolen

Nathan D.

Date: 5/17/2012 5:00:00 PM

good luck in contest

Nathan D.

Date: 5/17/2012 4:59:00 PM

good luck in contest

Elliott Bowe The Drunken Poet

Date: 5/17/2012 8:23:00 AM

NOW THIS IS Superb!!!

Elliott Bowe The Drunken Poet

Date: 5/17/2012 8:22:00 AM

NOW THIS IS Superb!!!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 5/17/2012 7:40:00 AM

A haiku poem can say alot B.E.Susan, well written. - oxox love Anne-Lise

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 5/16/2012 7:14:00 PM

A really beautiful haiku Susan. It should take top honors in the contest. Thanks for your comments on my work.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 5/16/2012 6:30:00 PM

This is a wnner for sure..Enjoyed its creativity..Good luck in the contest..Thanks for stopping by..I appreciate the kind review of my work..Sara

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/16/2012 5:29:00 PM

WOW, you did an awesome one, Truly, I love this, Susan

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 5/16/2012 4:17:00 PM

Hi, Susan! Thank you for all the non-stop comments.. I'm home already ~again! :-( , I'm in a faraway state of mind right now. (lacking it all) Not a weekend here------------- maybe later I will stand tall... good luck in the contest... always~ The Poet Destroyer

Jack Horne

Date: 5/16/2012 12:37:00 PM

clever and expressive haiku, Susan