Giving Up Cigarettes

I was a teen when first I met
My demon lover--cigarette.
I was a teen who was a fool;
But he was popular and cool.

For he was loved by movie stars
And soldiers sipping beer in bars--
No surgeon general warned of death
For those of us who breathed his breath.

At his first kiss I coughed and choked.
But I was obstinate.  I smoked.
This was no friendship formed in haste.
I had to cultivate his taste.

He followed me for fifty years,
With food, with drinks, with joy and tears--
Through good relationships and bad
He was the closest friend I had. 

Now as I try to break his spell,
He tortures me with living hell--
But time can heal so I won't  miss
His intimaste and toxic kiss.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Tapestry Avatar
October 19, 2018 at 8:44 PM
perfect
Jones Avatar
October 20, 2018 at 7:14 AM
Thanks, Lifes Tapestry.
Cami Avatar
October 29, 2016 at 8:37 AM
This is great Jerrell - and really representative of the smoking addiction I am forever trying to quit.
Jones Avatar
October 20, 2018 at 7:15 AM
Thanks, Margo. I've gone two years now without tobacco or alcohol.
May Avatar
October 29, 2016 at 8:33 AM
They do put you under a spell...Very good write
Sands Avatar
October 29, 2016 at 8:32 AM
This is a good one Jerrell! :)
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