Giving Up

The endless winter's in my soul - The desperation takes its toll. My mourning star shines in the sky. My every dream was just a lie. My passion left me all alone. Am I just my own empty clone? I see no hope, no saving grace. I'm gonna die here in this place. All my mistakes, the ones I hurt... I'm suffocating with my fault. And all my scars no longer ache, Because there's nothing left to break.

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Silent One

Date: 7/19/2018 9:14:00 AM

Deep and emotive write Julia... I hope you are ok..

Arturo Michael

Date: 1/7/2018 4:20:00 PM

Two important lines that stayed with me after reading your poem..."My mourning star shines in the sky.' and " And all my scars no longer ache, Because there's nothing left to break." They are freedom lines...After the storm...All the best to you