Giving Taking

Giving and Taking

Deep within you I feel love but it’s not what you’re giving
My emotion I feel love but it’s not how we’re living
Devotion I feel love but it’s not what we’re saying
Your eyes I see love but it’s not what you’re thinking
Your lips I taste love but it’s not what you’re finding
Your smile I see love but it’s not what you’re conveying
Your love I feel love but it’s never what we‘re defining
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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June 26, 2013 at 8:50 AM
yes we feel it but is it really what we are getting ??, enjoyed your write, ~always, Linda
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