Giving Service

Before the sun does wake,
Fresh bread, the ovens bake.
Children soundly sleep awhile.
Their mother kneads the dough.
An effervescent glow,
Shining on her peaceful smile.
Abides within her heart.
Love showing since the start,
Giving service grows worthwhile.

© September 30, 2011
Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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September 30, 2011 at 1:34 PM
I enjoyed reading your excellent poetry today Dane Ann. I wish you a most enjoyable weekend with lots of sunshine and happy thoughts. Love, Carol
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September 30, 2011 at 8:10 AM
Dane, great rhyme,, shine,, and peaceful... to my nose,. enjoyed,...p.d.
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