Givers Gain

To give is to gain 
in the eyes of the mind
of a soul that is honest
and loving and kind.
It's fair to expect
that you get what you give
as your life is a measure
of morals you live.

What do we gain 
when were willing to give?
What force feeds the soul
in our willing to live?
When given the chance
of a lifetime to choose,
our hope is the treasure
our hearts cannot lose.

Like a torch we pass down
to each, one by one.
To mothers as daughters
and fathers as sons,
a hope burning brightly, 
a steady flame fast,
the strength of our future 
through hope from our past.

We pass on these ways
without saying a word
as actions speak louder
and clearly are heard.
The examples are set
by the actions we choose, 
without even thinking
of what we could lose 

What is the worth
in the willing to give?
What is the point
of our purpose to live?
We give with the hope
of a better tomorrow.
To give up our hope
were are certain for sorrow

What is the cost
when we won't even try?
To give up our hope
and eventually die?
We break the connections
that keep us in sync,
a game of survival
that's lived on the brink.

All things find death
in the journey of life.
Hope is the light
through the darkness of strife.
We give and we gain,
give up and we lose.
What we will give 
shapes the world that we choose.

                           - Jeannie Minor

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



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Date: 5/20/2016 4:52:00 AM
Hello Jeannie. I truly believe that we are here to give and to serve up as much love to others as we can. In doing so we have made the world a better place for others and ourselves. You have conveyed that well in your poem and it was a joy to read. Thanks for sharing, my friend..... Robert.
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Jeannie Cronin
Date: 5/21/2016 12:59:00 AM
Thanks Robert. I appreciate your kindness. Your comment inspired me to change the last line. I like it better like this.
Date: 3/21/2016 2:07:00 PM
nice poem,i love it
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Jeannie Cronin
Date: 3/21/2016 5:22:00 PM
Thank you, Sneha. So nice to make you acquaintance.
Date: 3/16/2016 2:25:00 PM
Superb piece Jeannie, truly well said, inspiring and uplifting indeed!
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Jeannie Cronin
Date: 3/16/2016 2:36:00 PM
Thank you, Gordon. I always enjoy and appreciate your visits.
Date: 3/13/2016 7:47:00 PM
An inspirational write, Jeannie. you have great style!!
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Jeannie Cronin
Date: 3/13/2016 10:50:00 PM
Thank you, Andrea. That's high praise from someone as accomplished as you. Congrats on all the opportunity you've had in pursuing your passion to write. I'm really happy for you. Thanks for taking the time to read and comment on my "style" Ha! I so dig that! Makes me feel like a real writer!
Date: 3/12/2016 9:37:00 PM
Another brilliant write, Jeannie. A very powerful message. Peace my dear friend:)
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Jeannie Cronin
Date: 3/12/2016 9:40:00 PM
Thanks Daniel. Always a joy to hear from you. Take the best of care.
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Daniel Turner
Date: 3/12/2016 9:40:00 PM
Smiling:):)
Date: 3/12/2016 6:46:00 PM
Very good rhythmic pace along with an admirable message. Good write...
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Jeannie Cronin
Date: 3/12/2016 7:16:00 PM
Thank you, Charlie. Thanks for the visit.
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