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Giver

focus fought fatigue fixated, a halo 'cross the moon velvet drapes the wall black light leads she lies alone in wait outstretched and open wide a crescendo coming near gifted for a lord he gives her space his worth spoken in tongues of fire incense burned lights flickered back and forth to the rhythm of the wind her song plays out echoing thru the secrets of long lost chambers she touches his sky and white clouds blow beyond her gorget succumbing inside the outer glow

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Date: 4/22/2020 12:08:00 AM
We need more givers in every sense, beautiful write!
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Ts Poetry
Date: 4/22/2020 7:31:00 AM
That we do...thanks Arthur
Date: 4/21/2020 3:58:00 PM
extremely sensual TS and I love the use of alliteration:-) hope you and the family are well:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 4/21/2020 5:30:00 PM
Thanks Jan...all is well
Date: 4/20/2020 5:29:00 PM
Beautiful. I love it. Gorget...tres tres sensual. The Winner by far....so far. ;) Regards, Off to the Ghetto. xx
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Ts Poetry
Date: 4/21/2020 1:16:00 PM
Thanks Leanne
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Lady Labyrinth
Date: 4/20/2020 8:05:00 PM
This poem is my Today's Winner. xx
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Lady Labyrinth
Date: 4/20/2020 8:04:00 PM
I just wanted to dirty your page with my comments again. This poem you have written here, is without doubt beautifully constructed and oozes sensuality. However, I love the use of the word "gorget". It gave me pause to think, and as we know, that can be a real mind'field. The removal of the gorget, or opening of the throat armour aligned my perspective of your poem to a whole new level, that of opening the throat chakra - add that to your title "Giver", absolutely profound.
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Lady Labyrinth
Date: 4/20/2020 8:04:00 PM
https://www.chakra-anatomy.com/throat-chakra.html
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Lady Labyrinth
Date: 4/20/2020 8:04:00 PM
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Vishuddha
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Ts Poetry
Date: 4/20/2020 5:48:00 PM
Thanks Modesty xx...enjoy

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