Giver

focus fought fatigue fixated, a halo 'cross the moon velvet drapes the wall black light leads she lies alone in wait outstretched and open wide a crescendo coming near gifted for a lord he gives her space his worth spoken in tongues of fire incense burned lights flickered back and forth to the rhythm of the wind her song plays out echoing thru the secrets of long lost chambers she touches his sky and white clouds blow beyond her gorget succumbing inside the outer glow
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Vaso Avatar
April 22, 2020 at 12:08 AM
We need more givers in every sense, beautiful write!
Poetry Avatar
April 22, 2020 at 7:31 AM
That we do...thanks Arthur
Allison Avatar
April 21, 2020 at 3:58 PM
extremely sensual TS and I love the use of alliteration:-) hope you and the family are well:-) hugs Jan xx
Poetry Avatar
April 21, 2020 at 5:30 PM
Thanks Jan...all is well
Labyrinth Avatar
April 20, 2020 at 5:29 PM
Beautiful. I love it. Gorget...tres tres sensual. The Winner by far....so far. ;) Regards, Off to the Ghetto. xx
Poetry Avatar
April 21, 2020 at 1:16 PM
Thanks Leanne
Labyrinth Avatar
April 20, 2020 at 8:05 PM
This poem is my Today's Winner. xx
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April 20, 2020 at 8:04 PM
I just wanted to dirty your page with my comments again. This poem you have written here, is without doubt beautifully constructed and oozes sensuality. However, I love the use of the word "gorget". It gave me pause to think, and as we know, that can be a real mind'field. The removal of the gorget, or opening of the throat armour aligned my perspective of your poem to a whole new level, that of opening the throat chakra - add that to your title "Giver", absolutely profound.
Labyrinth Avatar
April 20, 2020 at 8:04 PM
https://www.chakra-anatomy.com/throat-chakra.html
Labyrinth Avatar
April 20, 2020 at 8:04 PM
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Vishuddha
Poetry Avatar
April 20, 2020 at 5:48 PM
Thanks Modesty xx...enjoy
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