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Give Your Heart To Me

I 
beg 
you, babe,
desperately;
surrender your heart. 
Give it to no one else but me.
I don't mean to be selfish, I want the whole damn thing!
Just know this; if I could borrow and advertise it, I would, because---
                                                                                       it's that special!


                            (Modified Fibonacci)


Date written: 04/10/2021
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Nicole Avatar
April 10, 2021 at 6:20 PM
Oh my ! "I don't mean to be selfish" I don't think you are. Wanting someone that much, the desire and need is overwhelming indeed. Your thoughts caress gently around me and my heart. I wish to place this is my favorites. :) Brandy
Ibeh Avatar
April 10, 2021 at 6:47 PM
Thank you so much for the wonderful feedback and FAV, Brandy:-) Most obliged.
Dietrich Avatar
April 10, 2021 at 1:18 PM
oh this is sure sweet, Edward. Keep up with these kinds of poems!
Ibeh Avatar
April 10, 2021 at 3:00 PM
Thank you so much for the lovely visit, Andrea:-)
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