Bl Devnath Poet Rhyme

Give Up To Sadden

Who said is what 
                                     may be a matter 
                                     if love is said well
                                   thought to be better 

                                      a dress of mass 
                                   worn for a fixed time
                                     if invalid its beauty
                                      may lead to crime 

                                    guarantee is not fixed
                                   when what will happen
                                  enjoy the world paradise
                                       give up to sadden

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Anne-Lise Andresen June 6, 2017 at 1:28 PM - We must never give up - if we give up the world can never be a paradise, Bl - Do not let the crime win - Very well written - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Bl Devnath June 6, 2017 at 2:38 PM God is Divine Wisdom and Divine wisdom is God too. The best wisdom for human beings is true love only. To enjoy this paradise love must be known means felt first. One who has hate in heart does not know this God gifted paradise and treats this paradise as hell. i think in this way my dear lovely friend. Thanks for your beautiful comment. Loved always, bl

Eve Roper June 5, 2017 at 9:15 PM Love the message in your poem, BL, we all need to stay away from all his temptations. Bl Devnath June 6, 2017 at 2:38 PM God is Divine Wisdom and Divine wisdom is God too. The best wisdom for human beings is true love only. To enjoy this paradise love must be known means felt first. One who has hate in heart does not know this God gifted paradise and treats this paradise as hell. i think in this way my dear lovely friend. Thanks for your beautiful comment. Loved always, bl