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Give Up and Drop

Not much on mind Thoughts were left way behind I look back but nothing can be seen Eyes exhausted of blurred scene Should I give up Tap out and drop All I hear ,don't succumb Your time is yet to come I try to listen and do Hope to slip out of the total blue 17 Aug 2021

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Indiana Shaw

Date: 8/25/2021 10:14:00 AM

-> -> -> -> about turn <- <- <- No, No, No, wrong way, Um, OK -> -> -> -> -> . . . ; )

Marilene Evans

Date: 8/17/2021 8:34:00 PM

Yes, hope for the best. You are strong not to give up, tap out and drop. So hold still, brace to gain strength and keep going.

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 8/17/2021 1:40:00 PM

Thank-you for commenting on my poem. I am passionate about our Planet and feel that we are heading towards catastrophe. Blessings, Jennifer.

Robert Lindley

Date: 8/17/2021 5:27:00 AM

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Caren Krutsinger

Date: 8/17/2021 1:36:00 AM

It sounds like you are determined to not give up Tap out and drop " - I think this is good; sounds positive.

Mohamed Omar
Date: 8/17/2021 2:19:00 AM

Thank you for your appraisal . I do appreciate your critique .You are an awesome poet .