Mohamed Omar Poet Rhyme

Give Up and Drop

Not much on mind
 Thoughts were left way behind
   I look back but nothing can be seen 
     Eyes exhausted of blurred scene 
       Should I give up 
         Tap out and drop 
           All I hear ,don't succumb 
             Your time is yet to come 
               I try to listen and do 
                 Hope to slip out of the total blue 



17 Aug 2021

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Indiana Shaw August 25, 2021 at 10:14 AM -> -> -> -> about turn <- <- <- No, No, No, wrong way, Um, OK -> -> -> -> -> . . . ; )

Marilene Evans August 17, 2021 at 8:34 PM Yes, hope for the best. You are strong not to give up, tap out and drop. So hold still, brace to gain strength and keep going.

Jennifer Proxenos August 17, 2021 at 1:40 PM Thank-you for commenting on my poem. I am passionate about our Planet and feel that we are heading towards catastrophe. Blessings, Jennifer.

Robert Lindley August 17, 2021 at 5:27 AM >>>>>>>>>>>>

Caren Krutsinger August 17, 2021 at 1:36 AM It sounds like you are determined to not give up Tap out and drop " - I think this is good; sounds positive. Mohamed Omar August 17, 2021 at 2:19 AM Thank you for your appraisal . I do appreciate your critique .You are an awesome poet .