Give Thanks

It’s okay if it ends now.
Quite fine if it stops here.
Never expected the joys I’ve had.
Children. Amazing. The best. 
Their innocence, their laughter, their passion to breathe. 

I have loved too. 
Loved my children, and my mother. 
They too have loved me in return. 
Actually, perhaps first, they taught me. 
I have loved a woman as well.
I think briefly she loved me.
Then unrequited was my love forever. 

Still to tingle, obsess, crave our rendezvous.
Imagine her smile, natural, unforced, her gentle face, 
her beckoning eyes, her rose moist lips to kiss.
She was beautifully formed and lovely to behold.
My pulse perpetually pounded in her presence.  
So special she was. 
So special she made me feel. 
Once. 
Only in love does participation surpass anticipation. 
I’ve experienced this gift, this grace.
Many do not. 

There is still love in me. 
A gratitude of love. 
Compelled to give thanks. 
How?
Discover through sacrifice, self-discipline, and longsuffering,
by faith. 
Who?
Totus tuus
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Agustin Avatar
June 11, 2024 at 4:55 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
Waters Avatar
September 21, 2021 at 8:59 PM
Steve, You beautifully express the loneliness many of us relate to in unbalanced relationships. That longing to be seen, heard, held and loved met with cool indifference. Please keep writing. You’re a remarkable poet.
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February 13, 2016 at 10:25 PM
steve, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. LOVE LINDA
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October 14, 2015 at 7:56 PM
Hi Steve, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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October 13, 2015 at 4:57 PM
Steve, WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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