Give Me a Smile

Your smile makes
the moon smile
your beauty makes
the room brighter
I like your nails
I like your eyes
I will be a fighter
to save your smile!

Your voice makes
the birdsong sweet
your touch melts
the stone forever
I like your nose
I like your lips
I will be a lover
to get your smile!

Your hardship makes
my heart too hurts
your tears make
my eyes to yell
and I feel unwell
please, stop crying
I love you, sweet
just give me a smile!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Roper Avatar
September 16, 2020 at 11:18 AM
Good poem. Like Caren mentioned The essence of your love is what one captures.
Krutsinger Avatar
July 25, 2020 at 12:52 AM
I was shocked when you listed "nails" before "eyes" but we notice what we notice. The essence is that you love everything about her. It comes across beautifuly.
Islam Avatar
July 25, 2020 at 3:07 AM
Dear poet, thank you so much for your comments about it. Stay safe!
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