Give and Take

Here
You May
Have it All
I am glad to 
Give

What?
Again?
You’re always
So willing to
Take




Written 03-02-2019
Contest: Light Up The Page - Lanterne
Sponsor: Joseph May

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019



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Date: 3/10/2019 10:28:00 PM
A sincere congratulations on your win in Joseph's "Lanterne" contest, Caren - blessings and best wishes, and keep that ink flowing, my friend! :-) <3
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 3/11/2019 2:26:00 AM
Thank you Gregory. I do believe I will. I truly do not think I can stop yet.
Date: 3/10/2019 6:47:00 PM
Dropping back to say many congrats on your win Caren:-) hugs Jan xx
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 3/10/2019 8:49:00 PM
Thank you Jan. I appreciate it.
Date: 3/9/2019 8:19:00 AM
- Congratulations on your winning poem: Give and Take, Caren :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 3/9/2019 8:36:00 AM
Thank you Anne-Lise. If the takers knew what the givers know, they would readily give.
Date: 3/3/2019 2:33:00 PM
- ... my suggestion is also "give and take" ... :) - Yours is awesome, Caren :) - Best wishes in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 3/3/2019 2:38:00 PM
Thank you so much. As soon as I thought "give" I immediately saw "take".
Date: 3/3/2019 12:38:00 PM
Good luck in the contest Caren, I like this poem - some people only know how to take and never give - well said. Poetry hugs, Jennifer.
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 3/3/2019 2:39:00 PM
I feel sorry for the takers; I try to tell them sometimes that the best, fastest ways to relieve stress, depression, anxiety, and sadness is to help someone else. Unfortunately, they do not believe me. They cannot trust me for they do not trust themselves. Alas.
Date: 3/3/2019 11:24:00 AM
As a wise man told me when I started out in life: 'Be a giver; not a taker.' You are in exalted company, my friend. This man, my unofficial mentor, was a master teacher; best I've ever seen. He could tame the most lion-like students. I'm still learning from him 15 years after I last saw him teach... :) gw
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 3/3/2019 2:24:00 PM
Giving to others always comes back to you in unexpected wonderful ways eventually.
Date: 3/3/2019 4:23:00 AM
great opposite ends of the spectrum and I love the way you got Joseph's surname in the first one lol lol:-) hugs Jan xx
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 3/3/2019 2:24:00 PM
Accidentally done, but haha for that!
Date: 3/3/2019 3:19:00 AM
Many times the case dearest, Caren! Witty!
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 3/3/2019 2:24:00 PM
Thank you so much my friend.
Date: 3/2/2019 11:35:00 PM
LOL :) What a hit !! :D
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 3/3/2019 2:25:00 PM
It was easy once I started with "give" and "take". It pretty much wrote itself down.
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