Girls Night Out

It's the girls night out
 at the local country bar.
This time we'll have to try
 not to go too far.

We'll have no more 
than seven shooters each,
And no more standing on the table 
giving a slightly slurred speech.

On with our cowboy boots 
and skirts a bit too short
To entice a dance partner,
 a cowboy is a good sport.

We'll try and talk the band 
into playing our favourite tune
And sing along like coyotes 
howling at the moon.

We'll dance a few, and sing a few, 
then maybe a few more.
We won't start a fight like Friday night 
and get escorted to the door.

It's all in fun, we're just kids at heart, 
going out to play.
It's time to unwind and let down our hair,
 after all we've worked all day.

There's karaoke and two-stepping 
and flirting with the guys
And telling stories, some of them true,
 most of them little white lies.

We don't do this nearly enough,
 at least that's what we think.
So here's to us, the local cowgirls, 
now would someone buy us a drink.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 6/9/2014 9:36:00 AM
FRANCINE, Congratulations, on your awesome winning poem... LUV -LINDA-
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Date: 8/25/2010 9:32:00 PM
So, are you a cowgirl, Francine?? I don't drink for religious reasons, but you sure make all this sound fun! Luv, Andrea
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Date: 8/25/2010 9:50:00 AM
Enjoyable poem! Sounds like you are form Texas and going to a honky - tonk. Peace & Blessings Matthew Anish
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Date: 8/24/2010 3:43:00 PM
Sounds Like fun - I tend to give lots of slurred speaches when I drink too much, wonderful poem Francine!~Tirzah~
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Date: 8/24/2010 2:16:00 PM
Yippee Ki Yay......Great write my friend.....Larry
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Date: 8/24/2010 10:44:00 AM
Thank you on all the wonderful comments, and I really enjoyed the read. Friends are a great part of life.
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Date: 8/24/2010 10:07:00 AM
Francine felt like I was there with you.. Awesome imagery as well.. Hope you are enjoying your day.. Wilma
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Date: 8/24/2010 7:47:00 AM
Sounds like a rousing good time Francine.. I am all for karaoke and having fun.. and u give some great visuals here my friend.. enjoyed this piece.. much.. luv..cio..
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Date: 8/24/2010 6:49:00 AM
Live while you can , enjoy yourself like I enjoyed this write
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Date: 8/24/2010 6:03:00 AM
Excellent write, Francine. LOL Great job. Thanks for your kind words. Have a great week. xxxRalph
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Date: 8/24/2010 4:54:00 AM
lol you got it drinks on me!!!! lovely write, made me smile....always Michael
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Date: 8/24/2010 12:13:00 AM
lol I've been there before Francine!especially liked the part about singing like coyotes howling at the moon...enjoyed it tc..Deb
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Date: 8/23/2010 11:02:00 PM
a nice one,, enjoyed your write on girls night out..P.D.
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