Girl Talk

they love to wack
there sack
about this 
if  you sit 
and see how they kiss
and lay back
on the rack
 see how they
just balk
its all
GIRL TALK
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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June 24, 2023 at 1:01 PM
This is a small poem, but there is so much of a story within it that it feels long. Great job on that, it isn't easy! However, I think you might have meant "their" in line two instead of "there." I'm not sure though.
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