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Girl In a Tree

Some girl high in a tree Surprised wife and me: —how are you two? —just fine, and you? Fine, thank you, she said As we strolled ahead, Impressed less by her height Than her manner, polite.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 11/30/2016 9:10:00 AM
I liked every line, all of the rhyme, and especially the premise of politeness. Very enjoyable read indeed!
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David Bose
Date: 11/30/2016 9:14:00 AM
Thanks, Janet ... and that really happened. My wife and I still smile about it. Thanks again, Dave
Date: 10/28/2016 3:51:00 PM
Sweet :)
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