David Bose Poet Rhyme

Girl In a Tree

Some girl high in a tree
Surprised wife and me:
—how are you two?
—just fine, and you?
Fine, thank you, she said
As we strolled ahead,
Impressed less by her height
Than her manner, polite.

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Janet Grace November 30, 2016 at 9:10 AM I liked every line, all of the rhyme, and especially the premise of politeness. Very enjoyable read indeed! David Bose November 30, 2016 at 9:14 AM Thanks, Janet ... and that really happened. My wife and I still smile about it. Thanks again, Dave

Heidi Sands October 28, 2016 at 3:51 PM Sweet :)