Girl Child

Cried she concealingly in her heart,
felt lone and heavy,
disconcerted she was from her graceless life ,
Waited for the support of someone's hand,
and his courteous voice.

Shoddy reason it was which her family verbalised,
downhearted she felt in her mundane life,
she burked her feelings and tried to take a breath,
But found it effete tto restrain her mind and flesh,
and died with the charge of annihilating oneself.

No one knew that her parents cursed her,
None knew how gravely her thrashing went on ,
Nobody knew that she was treated extrinsic,
Not any soul knew ,
That she was tormented so hard.

Her body was thrown into a stream nearby,
Not a proper burial was given to that innocent child,
and twenty two she was with a beautiful smile,
but was only tortured,
B'coz she was born as a 'Girl Child'.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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Date: 5/6/2015 12:40:00 PM
- Hey Prerna, nice that you have chosen this web page to share your thoughts and words - welcome to us :) - Your first poem I find it very well written and deeply moving, well done - Looking forward to reading more of your writing in the future - A quick greeting from Norway and Anne-Lise :)
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Prerna Sharma
Date: 5/8/2015 5:09:00 AM
Thank you so much for your lovely greetings nd wishes :)
Date: 5/4/2015 3:38:00 PM
Prerna Sharma,, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry when you are ready :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy 2015, with New Poet Friends @-> LINDA <-@
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Prerna Sharma
Date: 5/5/2015 5:24:00 AM
Thank u LINDA , for your sweet welcome :) , nd support .... i m glad having met a friend like you
Date: 5/1/2015 11:25:00 PM
Prerna, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Prerna Sharma
Date: 5/3/2015 6:32:00 AM
Thank you for ur wishes nd overwhelmings thoughts.. it was really very supporting for me ... i am glad to meet a poet like u..:)
Date: 5/1/2015 3:55:00 PM
Oh, that is so sad. But you wrote is so well. I can't wait to read more of your talented work! Welcome to Poetry Soup btw! <3 Tash
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Prerna Sharma
Date: 5/3/2015 6:25:00 AM
Thanks a lot for ur encouragement... nd support... ... it was really a very sweet jesture :)
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