Gird Up Your Mind

. Gird Up mind Stop evil Thoughts__think on pure Love

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Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 5/25/2010 5:40:00 PM

Beautiful message in your Lanterne Sara and something all should consider.. luv.. Linda-Marie

Lynette Chachere

Date: 5/21/2010 5:32:00 PM

my mind always does this to me. my 'evil thoughts sometimes control my pure. but what can we do without them(: thats good Sara, for you, keep them pure. -always

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/21/2010 3:58:00 PM

Good message, Sara! Keep YOUR creative pen flowing on your trip! LUv,andrea

John Loving Iii

Date: 5/21/2010 3:08:00 PM

thy spelling love backwards and see what it sounds like. john

Gert W. Knop

Date: 5/21/2010 8:56:00 AM

Coul'n have written it better, Sara! Well done and thank you for your kind ongoing comments...Gert

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 5/21/2010 8:07:00 AM

Nice write Sara.. love the blend... And yes my love I used to paint years ago.. New place and not much room set up yet for it.. Plus had shoulder surgery in Feb. so writing is my thing for now, and probably for good.. But I will paint again.. thanks for comments and your concern.. A true artist and a new friend you are.. Always Michael

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 5/21/2010 6:56:00 AM

wow! Sara, enjoyed your lantern. Think on pure, yes pure thoughts,..p..d

Michael Jordan

Date: 5/21/2010 6:55:00 AM

Sara, wonderful message in this short poem - Loved it, God Bless, mj

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 5/21/2010 6:55:00 AM

Very nice expression. Good luck

Sara Kendrick

Date: 5/21/2010 6:50:00 AM

Based on 1Peter 1: 6-13......We think that we can't control what we think but we can...If something pops into your mind just try thinking love or apple or any other word ...It is impossible to think on both at the same time...The "Bible" says to think on things that are lovely, pure .Etc.. Sara