Gimbaled Time

I stand
Rocking back and forth
Bending memories heal my wounds
Lost in winds that blow unseen
Grasping truth from drowning seas
Alone


11/07/15
3:50am
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Strand Avatar
September 30, 2021 at 1:27 AM
Imaginative last couplet Jim
Goff Avatar
September 30, 2021 at 1:37 PM
Thank you Brian!
Thomas Avatar
January 22, 2021 at 3:14 PM
Beautiful Jim. Hope you're still okay :)
Eastman Avatar
July 4, 2016 at 10:11 AM
The imagery is wonderfully written and does the subject proud.
Makama Avatar
February 29, 2016 at 9:14 AM
A lovely page with mind blowing lines. This is wonderful dear friend. Weldon and thank you for yet another excellent share
Bickerstaffe Avatar
February 22, 2016 at 9:29 PM
A splendid CINQUAIN! Keep up the good writing... Best wishes, Keith
A  Avatar
December 20, 2015 at 6:56 PM
You ARE a BEAUTIFUL MAN POET JAMES, stopped by to enjoy some of my favorite and best poets of 2010 - 1015 :) Hope you are well enjoying what is left of 2015. Sending an early Christmas Message with Hugs. May you have a blessed Christmas and a happy New Year. Good luck in all you do during 2016. ~SKAT LOVE~
Dietrich Avatar
November 18, 2015 at 8:11 PM
this some great itty bitty poetry, James. Sure enjoyed it!
Onclaud Avatar
November 8, 2015 at 9:47 AM
jimbo!...i got caught in your web of longing reveries...sentimentally embraced!..huggs
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