Sotto Poet Poet Other

Gifts Nurture the Earth

you yearn for
the scribble
poem in rain
like a dressmaker
of waves &
ebbing
              sociableness

Yet 
the steam
surrounding you
glide 
the zephyr
Within other
proclivity &
given 
                 appropriateness

Infrequently 
shepherd
the driblets
within 
your hunt
natural
grants are 
sustaining the
                   precipitousness


Written: May 13, 2022

A BRIAN STRAND PREMIERE CHOICE Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Brian Strand


NOTE:THIS IS AN OPEN(organic) FORM VERSE without grammatical symbols the ' open' relies upon 'the one breath limitation' & so inherently requires the 'reader' (reciter) to input and respond thus making the form a two way interplay and often a unique interpretation by the enigma so derived

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Caren Krutsinger May 19, 2022 at 12:39 PM A poem of sheer beauty!

Vijay Pandit May 14, 2022 at 5:19 AM Kudos my friend --you venture into new and different forms--beyond the ordinary.

Victor Buhagiar May 14, 2022 at 3:42 AM Indeed we need to read this more than once.

Harry Horsman May 13, 2022 at 11:04 PM The poetry superb, always i need a second and more reads, learning and complexity i enjoy.