Gifts

my gifts are those unhindered birds spreading wings in the tangerine sky, my gifts are those ruby-red roses spreading hues touching saddened hearts. my gifts are crimson dawn, amber clouds, floating sailboats in ocean's blue bosom, whispering raindrops, blossoming buds,. swaying leaves and mauve twilight. my gifts are those pure, unblemished smiles of children ~ innocent eyes lighten up. with all these divine gifts in my world, I have more than enough to be sailing through life! June 5, 2020

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Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 6/20/2020 5:45:00 PM

Hello Mala, this is so lovely. Thes are beautiful gits to have. Enjoy your evening my friend. love, Darlene.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 6/21/2020 1:09:00 PM

Hello Mala, yes the great gift is having wonderful friends like you.You are welcome. Best wishes to you. Darlene

Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 6/20/2020 7:10:00 PM

Dear My Lovely Friend, These are great gifts, but the best gift is having wonderful friends. Thank you for your thoughtful comments. Best wishes, Mala

Jcb Brul

Date: 6/19/2020 10:13:00 AM

"My gifts are those pure, unblemished smiles of children when I read them a magical story, and their eyes lighten up." Wow,that is the sweetest gift I know! This is an instant FAVE for me...Your pen has a heart.

Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 6/19/2020 10:45:00 AM

Thank you, my dear friend. Your thoughtful, kind, positive comments lighten up my mind. So cheery, so inspiring! Love, Mala