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Gifted Remedy

Buried under shields from the slightest sting Not one sense aware of the suffering Blind to the darkest path I created Deaf to the cries I once defeated Language of pain forgot to exist My frozen heart did best resist Silence muttered once again Wounds healed until their end Circle of life stood at its edge Peace untangled from its web Empty pages burnt to words Cries of blood were at once heard Worst nightmare turned into a dream Tears of victory flowed down the stream Gave meaning to a nameless curse Took sorrow out this pitiful verse

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Date: 4/3/2024 12:01:00 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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Date: 2/7/2016 10:18:00 PM
RABAB, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. LOVE LINDA
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Date: 9/30/2013 8:27:00 AM
This could be classified as couplets since you have rhymed in couplets except for the lines Circle of Life Stood At Its Edge/Peace Untangled From Its Web...Enjoyed reading this one..Great work..Sara
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Date: 8/16/2012 12:53:00 AM
Rabab it's quite heavy to class it as 'light poetry'...David
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Rabab Ahmad
Date: 8/16/2012 12:58:00 AM
Thank u,I get confused in the type a lot..

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