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Gift of Love: the First Poem

first love’s blue frock flirted a sleepy poet inside ~ first piece surfaced Oct. 02, 2020 MON-O Poetry Contest Contest Sponsor: Brian Strand *A 1st Place* in the following contest (judged on Oct. 8, 2020) (17 syllables) Oct. 2, 2020 How My First Poem Was Born Poetry Contest Contest Sponsor: JCB Burl

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Date: 3/28/2021 7:33:00 AM
lovely ~
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Date: 10/8/2020 5:37:00 PM
way to go, Newton!! Back with my congrats.
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Newton Ranaweera
Date: 10/9/2020 2:47:00 PM
Thank you so much, Andrea, for this lovely comment!!
Date: 10/8/2020 10:25:00 AM
Lovely, Newton ~ congrats
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Newton Ranaweera
Date: 10/8/2020 3:11:00 PM
Thank you so much, Line, for this sweet comment!!
Date: 10/8/2020 4:19:00 AM
.... and I'm back to congratulate you on your win, Newton :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 10/8/2020 3:12:00 PM
Thank you so much, Anne-Lise, for your revisit and the great comment!!
Date: 10/3/2020 6:06:00 PM
awesome imagery for this!! sorry I've been too busy to comment lately
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Newton Ranaweera
Date: 10/3/2020 7:08:00 PM
Thank you so much, Andrea, for this sweet comment!!
Date: 10/3/2020 3:05:00 PM
Really nice Monoku Newton, good luck in the contest. :)
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Newton Ranaweera
Date: 10/3/2020 3:24:00 PM
Thank you so much, Gary, for this great comment!!
Date: 10/2/2020 11:51:00 PM
very interesting this your poem piece salute alkas poetry
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Newton Ranaweera
Date: 10/3/2020 11:14:00 AM
Thank you so much, Alkas Poetry, for your visit and the great comment!!
Date: 10/2/2020 10:57:00 AM
Hello Arch Newton, The sleepy poet felt when it surfaced. enjoy your day my friend.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 10/3/2020 12:21:00 PM
Hello Arch Newton, you are welcome. Enjoy your day my friend.
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Newton Ranaweera
Date: 10/2/2020 2:01:00 PM
Thank you so much, Darlene, for your kind read and the sweet comment!!
Date: 10/2/2020 10:49:00 AM
Love is a great impetus for putting pen to paper. Nice write, Newton.
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Newton Ranaweera
Date: 10/2/2020 2:00:00 PM
Thank you so much, Jenna, for this lovelier comment!!
Date: 10/2/2020 8:28:00 AM
- So sweet :) - Good luck in the contest, Newton :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Newton Ranaweera
Date: 10/2/2020 9:57:00 AM
Thank you so much, Anne-Lise, for this great comment and the kind wish!!

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