Newton Ranaweera Poet Monoku

Gift of Love: the First Poem

first love’s blue frock flirted a sleepy poet inside ~ first piece surfaced


Oct. 02, 2020
MON-O Poetry Contest
Contest Sponsor: Brian Strand 


*A 1st Place* in the following contest (judged on Oct. 8, 2020)

(17 syllables)
Oct. 2, 2020
How My First Poem Was Born Poetry Contest
Contest Sponsor: JCB Burl

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Line Gauthier March 28, 2021 at 7:33 AM lovely ~

Andrea Dietrich October 8, 2020 at 5:37 PM way to go, Newton!! Back with my congrats. Newton Ranaweera October 9, 2020 at 2:47 PM Thank you so much, Andrea, for this lovely comment!!

Line Gauthier October 8, 2020 at 10:25 AM Lovely, Newton ~ congrats Newton Ranaweera October 8, 2020 at 3:11 PM Thank you so much, Line, for this sweet comment!!

Anne-Lise Andresen October 8, 2020 at 4:19 AM .... and I'm back to congratulate you on your win, Newton :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Newton Ranaweera October 8, 2020 at 3:12 PM Thank you so much, Anne-Lise, for your revisit and the great comment!!

Andrea Dietrich October 3, 2020 at 6:06 PM awesome imagery for this!! sorry I've been too busy to comment lately Newton Ranaweera October 3, 2020 at 7:08 PM Thank you so much, Andrea, for this sweet comment!!

Gary Smith October 3, 2020 at 3:05 PM Really nice Monoku Newton, good luck in the contest. :) Newton Ranaweera October 3, 2020 at 3:24 PM Thank you so much, Gary, for this great comment!!

Alkas Poetry October 2, 2020 at 11:51 PM very interesting this your poem piece salute alkas poetry Newton Ranaweera October 3, 2020 at 11:14 AM Thank you so much, Alkas Poetry, for your visit and the great comment!!

Darlene De Beaulieu October 2, 2020 at 10:57 AM Hello Arch Newton, The sleepy poet felt when it surfaced. enjoy your day my friend. Darlene De Beaulieu October 3, 2020 at 12:21 PM Hello Arch Newton, you are welcome. Enjoy your day my friend. Newton Ranaweera October 2, 2020 at 2:01 PM Thank you so much, Darlene, for your kind read and the sweet comment!!

Jenna Logan October 2, 2020 at 10:49 AM Love is a great impetus for putting pen to paper. Nice write, Newton. Newton Ranaweera October 2, 2020 at 2:00 PM Thank you so much, Jenna, for this lovelier comment!!

Anne-Lise Andresen October 2, 2020 at 8:28 AM - So sweet :) - Good luck in the contest, Newton :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Newton Ranaweera October 2, 2020 at 9:57 AM Thank you so much, Anne-Lise, for this great comment and the kind wish!!