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exhausted and sleepy elves, one last house on their lengthy list, slided down the chimney to deliver a gift, hard to resist. found fun Pokemon board wide open, left probably by mistake, decided to gift that game to themselves, a pleasing keepsake. December 22, 2021 "A Funny Christmas-themed 4-liner" Poetry Contest Sponsor:Tania Kitchin syllables checked by howmanysyllables.com THIRD PLACE

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Date: 1/11/2022 7:10:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. A cute write and pictures. Are the elves getting into trouble again??? Have a blessed day...........
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Date: 1/9/2022 9:37:00 AM
those elves are such rascals. Big congrats for you in the contest, Mala
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Date: 1/9/2022 3:33:00 PM
Thanks, Andrea.
Date: 1/9/2022 8:47:00 AM
Malabika, congratulations on your winning placement, this is a cute one!
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Date: 1/9/2022 3:34:00 PM
Thank you, Tania. Really appreciate.
Date: 12/23/2021 5:52:00 AM
Love this, Mala. Best wishes in the contest. Wishing you and yours a very Merry Christmas and a Healthy & Happy New Year. Blessings...Charlie
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Date: 12/23/2021 5:57:00 AM
Thanks, Charles. Wish you a Merry Christmas too!
Date: 12/22/2021 2:46:00 PM
Great one, Malabika, your grandchildren inspire you. Good luck in the contest. Hugs
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Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 12/22/2021 3:05:00 PM
Thanks, Eve. You are right - my grandsons inspire me! I think of them when I write a funny poem.

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