Malabika Ray Choudhury Poet Rhyme

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Gift For Elves

exhausted and sleepy elves, one last house on their lengthy list,
             slided down the chimney to deliver a gift, hard to resist. 
          found fun Pokemon board wide open, left probably by mistake, 
           decided to gift that game to themselves, a pleasing keepsake.


                                       December 22, 2021
              "A Funny Christmas-themed 4-liner" Poetry Contest
                                     Sponsor:Tania Kitchin
                    syllables checked by howmanysyllables.com
                                          THIRD PLACE

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Paula Goldsmith January 11, 2022 at 7:10 AM Congratulations on your win. A cute write and pictures. Are the elves getting into trouble again??? Have a blessed day...........

Andrea Dietrich January 9, 2022 at 9:37 AM those elves are such rascals. Big congrats for you in the contest, Mala Malabika Ray Choudhury January 9, 2022 at 3:33 PM Thanks, Andrea.

Tania Kitchin January 9, 2022 at 8:47 AM Malabika, congratulations on your winning placement, this is a cute one! Malabika Ray Choudhury January 9, 2022 at 3:34 PM Thank you, Tania. Really appreciate.

Charles Messina December 23, 2021 at 5:52 AM Love this, Mala. Best wishes in the contest. Wishing you and yours a very Merry Christmas and a Healthy & Happy New Year. Blessings...Charlie Malabika Ray Choudhury December 23, 2021 at 5:57 AM Thanks, Charles. Wish you a Merry Christmas too!

Eve Roper December 22, 2021 at 2:46 PM Great one, Malabika, your grandchildren inspire you. Good luck in the contest. Hugs Malabika Ray Choudhury December 22, 2021 at 3:05 PM Thanks, Eve. You are right - my grandsons inspire me! I think of them when I write a funny poem.