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Giant Leap

A globe wobbles in cosmos A man makes ... a giant leap for mankind A million hearts flutter on another.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 7/23/2014 5:36:00 PM
Hi, Suryanarayana Murty Nauduri :) Thank you for the sweet reply, on my comment. I'm a little late, getting back to all the replies, left a while back. XOX ~LINDA~
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Date: 7/9/2014 8:27:00 PM
Oh this is very cool, grats on making it to the winners list, much enjoyed :)
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Date: 7/8/2014 11:24:00 PM
Suryanarayana M, a nice wonderful win...Linda
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Date: 7/9/2014 11:15:00 AM
Thank you Linda. The people here are so friendly and encouraging.
Date: 7/8/2014 8:46:00 PM
Love it! congrats on a great win.. Hugs.. Arlne
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Date: 7/9/2014 11:18:00 AM
Thank you Ms Smith.
Date: 7/8/2014 5:50:00 PM
Lovely take on the theme. Congratulations on your win.
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Suryanarayana Murty Nauduri
Date: 7/9/2014 11:19:00 AM
Thank you Ms Gibson. I could relive the experience hibernating for long in my memory through this poem. Thank you.
Date: 7/8/2014 3:52:00 PM
this is a really NEAT one!!! I love that last line. Congrats on your win.
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Date: 7/9/2014 11:25:00 AM
Thank you Ms Dietrich. It is a nice feeling to get a pat from somebody who had adjudged so many poems before.
Date: 7/8/2014 1:19:00 PM
Great poem, though it's the first time I have met with this type of haiku. Man's first step on the moon caused quite a stir! Congrats on a fine win. // paul
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Suryanarayana Murty Nauduri
Date: 7/8/2014 1:27:00 PM
Thank you Paul Callus. Yes, I still remember the moment when I was glued to the radio to hear the historic moment.
Date: 7/8/2014 2:18:00 AM
Wonderful haiku Surya! Love ur take on the theme,, congrats on merited win!
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Suryanarayana Murty Nauduri
Date: 7/8/2014 1:08:00 PM
Thank you Dr. Sharma. It just clicked since cosmos is my passionate subject.
Date: 7/8/2014 12:38:00 AM
Nicely interpreted theme of the cosmos, Suryanarayana. Namaste
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Date: 7/8/2014 1:09:00 PM
Thank you Dr. Mehta. Namaste. Words of appreciation from people like you is a great fillip. Thank you once again.
Date: 7/8/2014 12:20:00 AM
Congratulations on a beautiful win! Well-deserved!
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Suryanarayana Murty Nauduri
Date: 7/8/2014 1:20:00 PM
Hello SKAT, I am sorry for the late response. Thank you for your encouraging comments. I searched for the poem in your posts but could not find that. Of course I love to read poems of every kind.
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Date: 7/8/2014 1:13:00 PM
Thank you Pandita Sanchez. It is really exciting to get noticed.
Date: 7/7/2014 9:16:00 PM
Suryanarayana Murty Nauduri ,,, Congratulations, Thank you for the awesome haiku. Enjoy my -Most Recent Blog Post if you like. ""Super Blind - Super Quick..."" Love SKAT
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Date: 7/8/2014 1:53:00 PM
Hello SKAT, I am sorry for the late response. Thank you for your encouraging comments. I searched for the poem in your posts but could not find that. Of course I love to read poems of every kind.
Date: 5/27/2014 7:10:00 AM
Great imagery - beautiful write!
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Date: 5/27/2014 8:57:00 AM
Thank you Pandita Sanchez for your very encouraging words.

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