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Giant Leap

A globe wobbles in cosmos
A man makes ... a giant leap for mankind
A million hearts flutter on another.

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Poet Destroyer A

July 23, 2014 at 5:36 PM

Hi, Suryanarayana Murty Nauduri :) Thank you for the sweet reply, on my comment. I'm a little late, getting back to all the replies, left a while back. XOX ~LINDA~

Casarah Nance

July 9, 2014 at 8:27 PM

Oh this is very cool, grats on making it to the winners list, much enjoyed :)

Poet Destroyer A

July 8, 2014 at 11:24 PM

Suryanarayana M, a nice wonderful win...Linda

Suryanarayana Murty Nauduri

July 9, 2014 at 11:15 AM

Thank you Linda. The people here are so friendly and encouraging.

Arlene Smith

July 8, 2014 at 8:46 PM

Love it! congrats on a great win.. Hugs.. Arlne

Suryanarayana Murty Nauduri

July 9, 2014 at 11:18 AM

Thank you Ms Smith.

Faye Gibson

July 8, 2014 at 5:50 PM

Lovely take on the theme. Congratulations on your win.

Suryanarayana Murty Nauduri

July 9, 2014 at 11:19 AM

Thank you Ms Gibson. I could relive the experience hibernating for long in my memory through this poem. Thank you.

Andrea Dietrich

July 8, 2014 at 3:52 PM

this is a really NEAT one!!! I love that last line. Congrats on your win.

Suryanarayana Murty Nauduri

July 9, 2014 at 11:25 AM

Thank you Ms Dietrich. It is a nice feeling to get a pat from somebody who had adjudged so many poems before.

Paul Callus

July 8, 2014 at 1:19 PM

Great poem, though it's the first time I have met with this type of haiku. Man's first step on the moon caused quite a stir! Congrats on a fine win. // paul

Suryanarayana Murty Nauduri

July 8, 2014 at 1:27 PM

Thank you Paul Callus. Yes, I still remember the moment when I was glued to the radio to hear the historic moment.

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

July 8, 2014 at 2:18 AM

Wonderful haiku Surya! Love ur take on the theme,, congrats on merited win!

Suryanarayana Murty Nauduri

July 8, 2014 at 1:08 PM

Thank you Dr. Sharma. It just clicked since cosmos is my passionate subject.

Dr.Ram Mehta

July 8, 2014 at 12:38 AM

Nicely interpreted theme of the cosmos, Suryanarayana. Namaste

Suryanarayana Murty Nauduri

July 8, 2014 at 1:09 PM

Thank you Dr. Mehta. Namaste. Words of appreciation from people like you is a great fillip. Thank you once again.

Pandita Sietesantos

July 8, 2014 at 12:20 AM

Congratulations on a beautiful win! Well-deserved!

Suryanarayana Murty Nauduri

July 8, 2014 at 1:20 PM

Hello SKAT, I am sorry for the late response. Thank you for your encouraging comments. I searched for the poem in your posts but could not find that. Of course I love to read poems of every kind.

Suryanarayana Murty Nauduri

July 8, 2014 at 1:13 PM

Thank you Pandita Sanchez. It is really exciting to get noticed.

Skat A

July 7, 2014 at 9:16 PM

Suryanarayana Murty Nauduri ,,, Congratulations, Thank you for the awesome haiku. Enjoy my -Most Recent Blog Post if you like. ""Super Blind - Super Quick..."" Love SKAT

Suryanarayana Murty Nauduri

July 8, 2014 at 1:53 PM

Hello SKAT, I am sorry for the late response. Thank you for your encouraging comments. I searched for the poem in your posts but could not find that. Of course I love to read poems of every kind.