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Giant Elephants

Giant elephants Flappy ears, Ivory tusks and long trunk, Huge elephant swirls and boom, Cheerful, royal as a drunken chunk, As he trumpets, stamps feet, vanishes the gloom, Now try putting him in the room ! Written Sept 3rd, 2015 Sponsor- Nathan D Contest- giant animals Awarded HM

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Skat A

Date: 9/18/2015 1:37:00 PM

good one

Balveen Cheema

Date: 9/17/2015 2:25:00 AM

Congrats for trying to put the elephant in a room, Upma!

Sandra Haight

Date: 9/16/2015 6:41:00 PM

Stopping back to congratulate you on your win, Dr. Upma! Both of our elephant tributes made the list! Hugs, Sandra

Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 9/16/2015 11:03:00 PM

Yeah Sandra, urs is awesome! Thnx for ur wishes n big congrats to u too!

Lycia Harding

Date: 9/16/2015 5:44:00 PM

Dr Sharma, congrats on the win with your darling Cinquian! xoxo

Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 9/16/2015 11:06:00 PM

Yeah I loved writing this Lycia! Thnx for ur wishes n visit!

Eve Roper

Date: 9/16/2015 4:07:00 PM

Great win! Hugs Eve

Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 9/16/2015 11:06:00 PM

Thnx Eve my dear friend! Appreciate ur visits!

Nathan D.

Date: 9/16/2015 12:49:00 PM

thank you

Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 9/16/2015 11:08:00 PM

Thnx for putting up the challenge Nathan! Glad u liked my poem!

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 9/4/2015 7:28:00 AM

Wonderful and amusing Cinquain, Dr. Upma. Good luck!

Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 9/16/2015 11:08:00 PM

Thnx Demetrios for your kind visits! Ur sincere wished hv brought me glory!

Kp Nunez

Date: 9/4/2015 2:29:00 AM

Nice cinquian, Dr. Upma! I love the humor here. Good luck in the contest. hugs!

Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 9/16/2015 11:09:00 PM

Thnx Kim!

Aurore Severo

Date: 9/4/2015 12:19:00 AM

hahahahahahaha great! xoxox

Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 9/16/2015 11:09:00 PM

Thnx for ur kind visit Aurore!

Sandra Haight

Date: 9/3/2015 6:53:00 PM

Love your elephant Cinquain, Dr. Upma! Your words paint the imagery of his movements so well. All the best for the contest. Hugs, Sandra

Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 9/16/2015 11:11:00 PM

Thnx Sandra! Glad u enjoyed the read!

Michael Tor

Date: 9/3/2015 5:44:00 PM

Very nice Dr. Upma. Good luck in the contest. It made me smile.

Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 9/16/2015 11:11:00 PM

Thnx Michael!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 9/3/2015 2:26:00 PM

- I've been sitting on the back of an elephant ..... really huge animals !!! (scary :))) - Great written - Good luck in the contest, Dr. Upma - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 9/16/2015 11:10:00 PM

Thnx Anne Lise! Appreciate ur kind visit wid lovely words!

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

Date: 9/3/2015 10:56:00 AM

Cute lil poem..Ive seen an elephatn and i reallh fibd them cute!!!~Olive eloisa

Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 9/16/2015 11:10:00 PM

Thnx Olive! Appreciate ur kind visit!