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Giant Elephants

Giant elephants Flappy ears, Ivory tusks and long trunk, Huge elephant swirls and boom, Cheerful, royal as a drunken chunk, As he trumpets, stamps feet, vanishes the gloom, Now try putting him in the room ! Written Sept 3rd, 2015 Sponsor- Nathan D Contest- giant animals Awarded HM

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Date: 9/18/2015 1:37:00 PM
good one
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Date: 9/17/2015 2:25:00 AM
Congrats for trying to put the elephant in a room, Upma!
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Date: 9/16/2015 6:41:00 PM
Stopping back to congratulate you on your win, Dr. Upma! Both of our elephant tributes made the list! Hugs, Sandra
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Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 9/16/2015 11:03:00 PM
Yeah Sandra, urs is awesome! Thnx for ur wishes n big congrats to u too!
Date: 9/16/2015 5:44:00 PM
Dr Sharma, congrats on the win with your darling Cinquian! xoxo
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Date: 9/16/2015 11:06:00 PM
Yeah I loved writing this Lycia! Thnx for ur wishes n visit!
Date: 9/16/2015 4:07:00 PM
Great win! Hugs Eve
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Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 9/16/2015 11:06:00 PM
Thnx Eve my dear friend! Appreciate ur visits!
Date: 9/16/2015 12:49:00 PM
thank you
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Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 9/16/2015 11:08:00 PM
Thnx for putting up the challenge Nathan! Glad u liked my poem!
Date: 9/4/2015 7:28:00 AM
Wonderful and amusing Cinquain, Dr. Upma. Good luck!
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Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 9/16/2015 11:08:00 PM
Thnx Demetrios for your kind visits! Ur sincere wished hv brought me glory!
Date: 9/4/2015 2:29:00 AM
Nice cinquian, Dr. Upma! I love the humor here. Good luck in the contest. hugs!
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Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 9/16/2015 11:09:00 PM
Thnx Kim!
Date: 9/4/2015 12:19:00 AM
hahahahahahaha great! xoxox
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Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 9/16/2015 11:09:00 PM
Thnx for ur kind visit Aurore!
Date: 9/3/2015 6:53:00 PM
Love your elephant Cinquain, Dr. Upma! Your words paint the imagery of his movements so well. All the best for the contest. Hugs, Sandra
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Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 9/16/2015 11:11:00 PM
Thnx Sandra! Glad u enjoyed the read!
Date: 9/3/2015 5:44:00 PM
Very nice Dr. Upma. Good luck in the contest. It made me smile.
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Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 9/16/2015 11:11:00 PM
Thnx Michael!
Date: 9/3/2015 2:26:00 PM
- I've been sitting on the back of an elephant ..... really huge animals !!! (scary :))) - Great written - Good luck in the contest, Dr. Upma - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 9/16/2015 11:10:00 PM
Thnx Anne Lise! Appreciate ur kind visit wid lovely words!
Date: 9/3/2015 10:56:00 AM
Cute lil poem..Ive seen an elephatn and i reallh fibd them cute!!!~Olive eloisa
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Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 9/16/2015 11:10:00 PM
Thnx Olive! Appreciate ur kind visit!

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