Dr. Upma A. Sharma Poet Cinquain

Giant Elephants

Giant elephants 






Flappy ears, Ivory tusks and long trunk,
Huge elephant swirls and boom,
Cheerful, royal as a drunken chunk,
As he trumpets, stamps feet, vanishes the gloom,
Now try putting him in the room !





Written Sept 3rd, 2015
Sponsor- Nathan D
Contest- giant animals 

Awarded HM

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Skat A September 18, 2015 at 1:37 PM good one

Balveen Cheema September 17, 2015 at 2:25 AM Congrats for trying to put the elephant in a room, Upma!

Sandra Haight September 16, 2015 at 6:41 PM Stopping back to congratulate you on your win, Dr. Upma! Both of our elephant tributes made the list! Hugs, Sandra Dr. Upma A. Sharma September 16, 2015 at 11:03 PM Yeah Sandra, urs is awesome! Thnx for ur wishes n big congrats to u too!

Lycia Harding September 16, 2015 at 5:44 PM Dr Sharma, congrats on the win with your darling Cinquian! xoxo Dr. Upma A. Sharma September 16, 2015 at 11:06 PM Yeah I loved writing this Lycia! Thnx for ur wishes n visit!

Eve Roper September 16, 2015 at 4:07 PM Great win! Hugs Eve Dr. Upma A. Sharma September 16, 2015 at 11:06 PM Thnx Eve my dear friend! Appreciate ur visits!

Nathan D. September 16, 2015 at 12:49 PM thank you Dr. Upma A. Sharma September 16, 2015 at 11:08 PM Thnx for putting up the challenge Nathan! Glad u liked my poem!

Demetrios Trifiatis September 4, 2015 at 7:28 AM Wonderful and amusing Cinquain, Dr. Upma. Good luck! Dr. Upma A. Sharma September 16, 2015 at 11:08 PM Thnx Demetrios for your kind visits! Ur sincere wished hv brought me glory!

Kp Nunez September 4, 2015 at 2:29 AM Nice cinquian, Dr. Upma! I love the humor here. Good luck in the contest. hugs! Dr. Upma A. Sharma September 16, 2015 at 11:09 PM Thnx Kim!

Aurore Severo September 4, 2015 at 12:19 AM hahahahahahaha great! xoxox Dr. Upma A. Sharma September 16, 2015 at 11:09 PM Thnx for ur kind visit Aurore!

Sandra Haight September 3, 2015 at 6:53 PM Love your elephant Cinquain, Dr. Upma! Your words paint the imagery of his movements so well. All the best for the contest. Hugs, Sandra Dr. Upma A. Sharma September 16, 2015 at 11:11 PM Thnx Sandra! Glad u enjoyed the read!

Michael Tor September 3, 2015 at 5:44 PM Very nice Dr. Upma. Good luck in the contest. It made me smile. Dr. Upma A. Sharma September 16, 2015 at 11:11 PM Thnx Michael!

Anne-Lise Andresen September 3, 2015 at 2:26 PM - I've been sitting on the back of an elephant ..... really huge animals !!! (scary :))) - Great written - Good luck in the contest, Dr. Upma - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Dr. Upma A. Sharma September 16, 2015 at 11:10 PM Thnx Anne Lise! Appreciate ur kind visit wid lovely words!

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser September 3, 2015 at 10:56 AM Cute lil poem..Ive seen an elephatn and i reallh fibd them cute!!!~Olive eloisa Dr. Upma A. Sharma September 16, 2015 at 11:10 PM Thnx Olive! Appreciate ur kind visit!