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Ghoulish Monster's Night

Walking in the dark ghostly night During the black stillness of twilight Into the forest of superstitious fear Burning eyes through you do sear A fuliginous mist hung in the air Obscured things that werent there Atmosphere held a sinister feel Fueling fears how will you deal Secrets held on this eves hallow Bodies hid in graves so shallow Sending through you such chills Behind the spooky haunted hills When you hear a thumping sound Jumping in fright you turn around Thinking this could be your ending Doomed feelings now are pending Screeching screams of night owls Werewolves deep guttural growls Make your skin feel it's crawling Leaving you there standing bawling ~No one escape from life alive you see~ So stay at home and you'll be free ~Even the dead tell stories of fright~ On this Ghoulish monsters night
"No one escapes from life alive" ~Michael Crichton~ "Even the dead tell stories" ~Marcus Sedgwick~ Haha my sad attempt at scary!;)

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Date: 10/24/2019 10:53:00 AM
Certainly perfect for "All Souls Eve", Poetess. Not something you would wish to read prior to setting off for home down evil lanes leading into deep, dark woods, when having to walk through, some dismal Winters night that's for sure. Lol Lots of warm hugs to help speed you quickly and safely back. :) john
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John Fleming
Date: 10/25/2019 1:44:00 AM
As long as we are loaded up for bear -- or worse even! Some pretty awful creatures lurking in them there woods...so I am led to believe. :) john
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 10/24/2019 3:45:00 PM
Haha so you enjoyed it then John? I am so glad you liked it! Maybe I will take you on that walk with me to perfect me! You game? Thank you so much! Enjoyed the warm hugs!;) back at ya!;)
Date: 10/23/2019 9:48:00 PM
Hey, you scared the pajamas right off of me, Brenda. ('Sad attempt,' my naked feet!). LOL. ~ Wolfman Jack-o-lantern
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 10/23/2019 11:03:00 PM
Haha! I can only hope my dad attempt would scare someone but still you have me smiling!;) thank you Gershon!;)
Date: 10/23/2019 9:02:00 PM
hmmm very good :)
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 10/23/2019 11:02:00 PM
Thanks muppet!;)
Date: 10/23/2019 8:00:00 AM
This is a wonder... Chilling. Bless you, Gina
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 10/23/2019 8:20:00 AM
Regina haha thank you so much;)
Date: 10/23/2019 7:43:00 AM
very thrilling write
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 10/23/2019 8:20:00 AM
Why jack I'm so use to seeing you on Facebook and never here! You honor me by commenting today! Thank you!;)
Date: 10/23/2019 7:24:00 AM
This was really good Brenda. A nicely crafted Halloween poem.
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 10/23/2019 8:19:00 AM
Thank you Chris! Lol I'm not use to doing scary or really funny but I did attempt to here! Haha! I still think it was a sad attempt but thank you!;)
Date: 10/23/2019 3:29:00 AM
Lovely flow, rhyme and imagery. It gave me goose bumps ;-) x
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 10/23/2019 8:18:00 AM
Elaine thank you! At least someone truly felt what I was trying to get across!;) you are so sweet!;)
Date: 10/22/2019 8:52:00 PM
Edgar Allan Chiri lol...scary sissy!...bro bro like...be patient my dear sissy...the surprise is coming...I don't think this has ever been done before...if you know your bro bro, he likes to be the first...maybe a sneek peak this weekend or Monday...ciao baby!
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 10/23/2019 11:09:00 PM
See bro bro you tease now I am more excited then before!;)
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Winged Warrior
Date: 10/23/2019 2:44:00 PM
Hey, I like Edgar Allen bro bro, it has a nice ring to it lol...dear sissy...I'll give you a hint...its more a visual than a write...but what a visual!... I can't wait for it myself lol...ta ta
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 10/23/2019 8:16:00 AM
Hahaha! Bro bro you are so silly! So does that make you Edgar Allen bro bro? Lol! And I can not wait to read this highly anticipated never done before write!;) thank you WW!;)
Date: 10/22/2019 8:31:00 PM
I enjoy reading you as well. The quotes at the end were a nice touch. Hugs Rick.
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 10/22/2019 8:32:00 PM
Haha! Thank you Rick! But yours are much more than my sad attempts!;)

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