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Ghosts

Grate them like cheese, these
Hushed memories, so I no longer
Obsess, on my perforated chest,
Scrape them off of my plate, no    
Time to waste, Sorrow
Salivates

Copyright © Black Eyed Susan | Year Posted 2012

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Kim Merryman Date: 2/26/2013 12:20:00 PM Congrats on your wonderful win, Susan! Love, Kim Login to Reply

Connie Gildersleeve Date: 2/25/2013 5:29:00 PM Congratulations on your well deserve win. Connie Login to Reply

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 2/25/2013 3:12:00 AM A very good poem to send to the contest and you won! - Congratulations! - Have a lovely new week! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :) Login to Reply

Poet Destroyer A Date: 2/24/2013 9:27:00 PM Hi Susan, , thank you for SUPPORTING MY NEWEST contest...CONGRATULATIONS on your awesome win ;-) LINDA Login to Reply

Carrie Richards Date: 5/21/2012 7:02:00 PM Better and better....you grab me with your wit...and also offer so much good sense in wise words. Another gem! ps....many many thanks for my placement in or acrostic contest.. My honor to place with my poem...thank you very much! Login to Reply

Jack Horne Date: 5/20/2012 10:58:00 AM Love the imagery, Susan. Congrats on all your wins : ) Login to Reply

Elliott Bowe The Drunken Poet Date: 5/17/2012 8:39:00 AM This is amazing dear.Very eccentric and stunning. Login to Reply

Elliott Bowe The Drunken Poet Date: 5/17/2012 8:38:00 AM This is amazing dear.Very eccentric and stunning. Login to Reply

Nathan D. Date: 5/11/2012 11:18:00 AM very nice acrostic like the choice of words. Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 5/10/2012 9:35:00 PM Just here to say HEY, SUSAN!!! Login to Reply

Poet Destroyer A Date: 5/8/2012 8:25:00 PM clever you are Susan, i like the fourth line with the scraping of the plate, time to comment away :), ....p.d. Login to Reply

Carol Sunshine Brown Date: 5/8/2012 12:11:00 PM A pleasure to read your poetry today Susan. I will try to come back later this week to read more. I have a spring cold and not up to reading for too long. Have a wonderful week. Love, Carol Login to Reply

Kabuteng P.Ink K. Date: 5/8/2012 9:39:00 AM Oh wowee! This sure is very unique, Susan! I never even thought of it that way but now that you've mentioned it, I think it's very fitting! Way to go with this acrostic! I find it so cool how you did it, flowed very well I think and I enjoy it very much when the words in an acrostic doesn't seemed forced :D Login to Reply

Harry Horsman Date: 5/8/2012 9:08:00 AM way to go, Susan, love this unique poem, such imagery. and a wonderful message. harry Login to Reply

David Williams Date: 5/8/2012 7:37:00 AM Susan, I like this a lot, though I would need a huge grater..David Login to Reply