Ghostly Ocean Falls In Love

Fog drifts through slick rocks,
Joining ocean with pink sky,
In passions embrace.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Sweetheart Avatar
February 23, 2010 at 6:21 PM
Thankxxx for your wonderful comments Marty on my poetry tonight.. appreciated and welcome always... I just posted a new blog (sent u a Soup Mail about it too) so if u could comment ..would luv your input.. thankxxxx ... "Sweetheart"
Chircop Avatar
February 23, 2010 at 5:40 AM
Wow,What a beautiful way to describe.. the picture....of all your best I chose this one..Romanticand Original,Im not afraid of Ghosts anymore:)talented Marty..Charma
Sweetheart Avatar
February 22, 2010 at 12:43 PM
OK ..sure winner here .. good luck in the contest ... but I am sticking to my opinion my friend.. great words of description for this exciting photo .. my entry is Essence.. lets keep our fingers crossed... luv.. "Sweetheart"
A  Avatar
February 21, 2010 at 1:27 PM
I LOVE YOUR TITTLE 100% I AM SORRY TO SAY . I FIND THIS POEM TO BE VERY INTRIGUING...THE ROMANTIC IMAGE I LOVE...
Haick Avatar
February 21, 2010 at 10:14 AM
Exquisite Haiku, Marty! A great entry for the contest! I wish you the best in the contest! Peace, Audrey
Richards Avatar
February 21, 2010 at 8:10 AM
Your romantic soul is shown, I love this unusual look at the photograph! Good luck, Marty! ~ Carrie
K. Avatar
February 21, 2010 at 6:47 AM
Your title caught my eye and I loved how you turned Raul's photo into a love story in just 3 lines at that! Well done , Mart--really enjoyed reaidng this :) best of luck in the contest :)
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