Ghostly Dare

The wrought iron gate creaked open with the push of my hand 
My nerves shook, my heart thumped, it was hard for me to stand 
But a dare is a dare and with my new digital camera ready 
I took tiny steps toward that haunted house, unsure unsteady 

The old house looked so eerie, it sure seemed super scary 
Stepping up the old pine steps, my knees shaking, I am wary 
Stories of days of old, the boy, the girl, and the old stepmom 
The thunderous night, the howl of the wind, heart be calm 

It was said one night that the papa went frightfully insane, 
Lashing out, he inflicted fear, with screaming rage and pain. 
Oh the house was beyond repair that night the ghosts moved in. 
There was no one to tend the gardens, there was no next of kin. 

The three lonely ghost roam freely each and every night 
Looking for answers to questions of their painful fright 
The house since abandoned, certain nights it has shook 
Fears of the deadly horrors that the three martyrs took 

With my camera ready, I sat there in a candlelit room 
Hoping for an image that may expose their chilling doom 
I saw the lady, and the children, I snapped a picture then fled 
Arriving home, no one would believe, for my batteries were dead.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 6/26/2014 2:05:00 AM
ooh sent a shiver down my spine and I love the twist in the final line - sheer brilliance! hugs Jan xxx
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Date: 6/26/2014 3:51:00 AM
Thanks Jan ...we love all your support.... Hugs Tim
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