Ghosties Grey

my ghosts were friendly not, stood round me bed forget me, got, when i blocked em out those few, shut off the third eye view, didna want them hot-en-tots ... Don
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Cavanaugh Avatar
September 6, 2012 at 7:55 AM
i love your style
Breidenthal Avatar
August 28, 2012 at 10:17 PM
Third eye view! I like that! Excellent verse Don. :D Loved the whole thing. Always, Laura
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August 28, 2012 at 8:12 AM
Hmmm... kinda weird... I kinda like it! Terry
Sivey Avatar
August 28, 2012 at 7:50 AM
You have created a grandiose write based on my fun loving poem! This is an expressive write my friend, full of delightful ghosts that play at night cut off by that third eye! What a wondrous poem Don, Great Work!!
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