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Ghost Tides

Phantom haze hovers,
Dense fog silently creeping:
Illusive currents.

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Jared Pickett

Date: 3/3/2010 9:45:00 AM

The picture you paint is reminiscent to MJ's Thriller..... Good work my friend....:JP]

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 2/24/2010 12:10:00 PM

Appreciate your comments on my blog Raul.. so interesting to see the different forms the poets like .. a way to get to know each personally I think... as much as we are ONE we are all DIFFERENT.. in POETRY.. thankxxx.. luv Linda-Marie ...

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 2/23/2010 5:47:00 PM

Thankxxx Raul for choosing my Essence as one of your winners for Ghost Tides contest.. all the poets look forward to your next photo and contest and if u ever stop we will all be disappointed... the photos are awesome ... I commented on your blog also and if u have time could u please comment on my recent blog about poetry just posted tonight.. would appreciate it.. thankxxx again for the wonderful dedication it takes to be a sponsor and run a contest on Soup... u are the BEST! luv.. Linda-Marie

John Beam

Date: 2/23/2010 1:39:00 PM

thank you for opportunity hope for more

Jo Bien

Date: 2/21/2010 5:03:00 PM

great haiku my friend..JB

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 2/21/2010 4:59:00 PM

Shame u cannot enter your own contest.. a perfect and brilliant description of your photo... awesome write Raul.. luv.. Linda-Marie

Date: 2/21/2010 3:50:00 PM

I like the action in this poem. Kind of pull the reader into it. I like the alliteration too. Keep on writing! Karen

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 2/21/2010 3:23:00 PM

I can picture the scene..as if im there with the phantoms around me..great great..Haiku Master..Is this for Raul's contest?:)

Susan Palli

Date: 2/21/2010 6:47:00 AM

scary!

Deirdre Omaidin

Date: 2/21/2010 3:51:00 AM

This is such a creative piece you have written, the picture is set right in front of our eyes, it's the kind of night that we don't like lingering around us for long but you pen it masterfully. Was delighted to be placed in your last haiku competition, there are such great fun, Déirdre

Edward Ford

Date: 2/20/2010 9:42:00 PM

So on the money Raul, so tell me are you the master of haiku, I appreciate the chance to have submitted an entry into your very tasteful contest and hope that when time permits you may also compete in one of mine, thank you my friend a third place finish is by no means a loss, keep up the creative scripting (I bit that from Sara, Hi luv) anyways I have a lot on my plate with my novels and painting but I appreciate being accepted into this elite family of grandeur, Sang =)

Eleanore Bourner

Date: 2/20/2010 6:48:00 PM

the imagery is amazing! love it :) ------Ell

Margaret Foster

Date: 2/20/2010 6:03:00 PM

I like the Phantom and ghost connection. The title is so perfect for the picture, and the verse is perfect for the title. So many great views from all participants enjoying your haiku contests. thank you..Margaret

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/20/2010 4:41:00 PM

soupmail.

Caroline Cécile Delacroix

Date: 2/20/2010 4:30:00 PM

Awesome Haiku! Thanks for sharing. Best wishes, Caroline.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/20/2010 4:09:00 PM

Very nice, RAul. Is this based on a picture from your picture collections?

Sara Kendrick

Date: 2/20/2010 2:13:00 PM

Great ghostly thoughts penned in this one. Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara

Laura Mckenzie

Date: 2/20/2010 1:59:00 PM

Raul~I really enjoy your contests I love working from a photo! Wonderful Haiku! Laura :0 )

Carrie Richards

Date: 2/20/2010 1:53:00 PM

Thank you so much, Raul, for the honor of doing well in your last contest! Looking forward to the next one...however, this will be a tough act to follow. Your haiku here, exceeds anything we might think of! But will be another fun challenge. Thanks for the inspirations and wonderful photographs to jump start our writings! Love, Carrie

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