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Ghost Ships

Ships of mist collide,
Far from eerie...midnight shores:
Battle of the damned.

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Timothy Hicks

March 9, 2013 at 1:31 PM

"Ships of mist"... I love that description! I wonder if these ships are actually real or just what the mist over the ocean makes you think of. Either way a good haiku!

Raul Moreno

March 9, 2013 at 1:33 PM

Just the imagination of the mist over the ocean taking shape

Robert Heemstra

March 8, 2013 at 4:58 PM

I've been reading a few of your haikus more traditional than mine. Nice work and thanks for leaving words at Perry Mason.

Raul Moreno

March 9, 2013 at 1:33 PM

Thanks! :)

Poet Destroyer A

March 7, 2013 at 10:51 AM

nice, PD

Raul Moreno

March 9, 2013 at 1:33 PM

Thanks! :)

Charmaine Chircop

March 5, 2013 at 11:57 PM

This haiku carries night mysteries of nature.I don t know why it made me think of pirates and ships lost in battles at sea still vivid in ghostly appearances..Awesome I wrote.a bunch of haiku awhile ago.but momentiraly can t feel inspired to write one..Charma

Raul Moreno

March 6, 2013 at 12:38 AM

That's exactly what I had in mind when I penned it, great observations.

Andrea Dietrich

March 5, 2013 at 9:04 PM

This is great haiku for me to read, and like Ruben says, metaphoric, which I always enjoy.

Raul Moreno

March 5, 2013 at 11:07 PM

It's always nice to hear from you Andrea, glad you are still around and thanks for stopping by and blessing me with a comment.

Debbie Duncan

March 5, 2013 at 10:58 AM

Love the haiku ,,, thank you for reading mine,,,, haiku six ;}

Raul Moreno

March 5, 2013 at 11:04 PM

Thanks for stopping by, I look forward to reading more...

Carrie Richards

March 5, 2013 at 8:46 AM

This is a dark, mysterious side of nature.....I can see two fog banks merging....colliding over the ocean...you captured this picture in my mind. You still write beautifully, Raul!

Raul Moreno

March 5, 2013 at 11:04 PM

Thanks for the comment, you had it right with the mysterious side of nature. I have always enjoyed taking a different approach in my work. Glad to hear from you guys again. God bless...

Sara Kendrick

March 5, 2013 at 7:19 AM

Interesting work..I can see a scene with ships at sea in a fog colliding but I don't think that is what you really intend..Thanks for stopping by..Sara

Raul Moreno

March 5, 2013 at 11:01 PM

Nice to hear from you again Sara, It's been some time since I been around. My intent was late night fog, taking the shape of ships and colliding into one another. In the continuation of an ancient battle that never seems to cease.

Tim Ryerson

March 5, 2013 at 3:24 AM

Raul, Raul my old friend!...Where the heck have you been?...Nice to see the 'haiku head-honcho' back!...I learned about them from you you know...Stay in touch - Tim

Raul Moreno

March 5, 2013 at 10:54 PM

It's nice to be back Tim, yeah I was on a a writing hiatus. I remember giving you a few pointers. God Bless

Chase Rhinehart

March 5, 2013 at 1:49 AM

I was surfing the site and this haiku caught my eye. Im into traditionals also, i aim to post something soon.

Raul Moreno

March 5, 2013 at 2:46 AM

*Something ;)

Raul Moreno

March 5, 2013 at 2:33 AM

Thanks for stopping by...I too enjoy writing traditional. I invite you to read some of my work. I'm sure you will find soemthing pleasing to your eye.

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