Taylor Graham Poet Triolet

Get Well

A sick-room is no proper place 
to gather April’s shooting-stars.
What good are flowers in a vase?
A sick-room is no proper place
to watch Earth blossom into space.
In the night sky, you’re missing Mars!
A sick-room is no proper place
to gather April’s shooting-stars.

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Justin Hensley June 3, 2009 at 5:46 PM Very beautiful poem you have painted for us to read, i enjoyed it every bit! Congratz on being featured also!

Vince Suzadail Jr. June 3, 2009 at 7:28 AM Congrats Taylor on your triolet being featured. Vince

Ernilando Tugaff June 1, 2009 at 1:14 AM Congratulations on your featured poem. More power and success. God bless. Ernilando

Raul Moreno May 3, 2009 at 2:13 PM Taylor, my belated congrats in making the semi finals...Raul

Carol Sunshine Brown April 10, 2009 at 5:54 AM Congratulations on your poetry making it into the semi finals. Wishing you the best of luck in the finals Taylor. Love, Carol