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Get Out of My Way

As I fly above my Genius Plain
I look at life not quite the same
I see wastes of Skin attempt again
To block my right of way!
Oh, give me Beauty imperfections,
Dissect the Heart and give me sections!
So I may dine on blood and wine,
My natural selections

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Robin Davis Date: 2/21/2014 8:55:00 AM Chan Chan I am now officially scared of you. LOL I might have to go to therapy cause of this cannibalistic poem. HEE HEE This is some dark and eerie stuff. Nicely done Thanks for the silly and crazy comment on my Meanness Can't Inhibit You Poem. Huggies Login to Reply Just That Archaic Poet Date: 2/21/2014 10:55:00 AM It is kinda dark lol. Thanks, Sweet Pea :)

Scott Thirtyseven Date: 11/1/2013 11:41:00 PM I like the "...wastes of Skin...", so deliciously dark. I've been looking for your poetry for some time, and reading this makes me glad I've finally found ya. Login to Reply Just That Archaic Poet Date: 11/2/2013 8:03:00 AM I'm happy you found me also, Scott. Hope you enjoy more of my pieces. Thanks for dropping by and for the review :)

Danesh Morgan Date: 8/29/2013 8:42:00 AM crude and barbaric but works well you might have to kill for another serving. . . Poe image Login to Reply Just That Archaic Poet Date: 8/29/2013 9:00:00 AM Thanks, Danesh. Poe has been a major poetic influence on me, so I'm sure there are conscious and unconscious nods to him here and there in my work. Glad you felt like it was barbaric and crude; I thought it had that feeling as well. Thanks for the astute review :)