Get A Life

get a life and stop pretending
all your drama is never ending
it's okay to be happy and to smile
try helping others and go the extra mile
simplicity is the best way to go
instead of constantly going to and fro
so, take a deep breath and then exhale
all the negativity you must expel
you can do it, I know you can
and if you fail just start over again
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Kendrick Avatar
March 4, 2025 at 7:17 AM
Dropping by to say congratulations on your winning work. So nice to see it in the winners' list. Way to go. Like the rhyme in this one. Sara K
mysore Avatar
March 2, 2025 at 8:02 PM
Nice message, congratulations on your win dear poet. Cheers!!!
Dietrich Avatar
March 2, 2025 at 2:38 PM
Very good advice in your poem. A heads up if you try my contests again: I like sentences with capitalized first words in a sentence and punctuation marks. There was nothing wrong with your writing and the rhymes were really cool . Thanks for participating and congrats.
Dunaway Avatar
March 3, 2025 at 2:07 PM
Got it and thank you.
Hassall Avatar
February 15, 2025 at 6:03 PM
Love this. I feel the "drama never ending" most days. Nice poem!
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