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Gesundheit

swirling colored glass
like sternutative wonders
Aaaahhh       aaaahhhh      Chihuly


05/24/16

artsenryu

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Lynn Marie

August 9, 2016 at 4:17 PM

A bold, bright Haiku that feels like it was as fun to read as it was for you to write it. Very clever writing, I enjoy your work immensely. blessings, lynn

Andrea Dietrich

June 6, 2016 at 3:45 PM

Sorry you did not see the rule for this one about your first time here. this was nice, but I never heard of Chihuly. Is it an artist as Jan says here? Don't feel bad. In the recent contest of nette, Soup would not allow me to enter the contest so I ended up with insomnia from worry over that little thing. I am crazy!!

Jan Allison

June 6, 2016 at 7:32 AM

Very clever use of the artist in the final line James - so creative:-) hugs Jan xx

James Inman

June 6, 2016 at 7:47 AM

Thanks Jan, a touch of humor.

Poet Destroyer A

May 31, 2016 at 12:29 AM

those colors have me in a daze, awesome ... enjoyed the read... ~Linda~

James Inman

May 31, 2016 at 6:34 AM

Thank you PD. Thanks for the visit.

Demetrios Trifiatis

May 26, 2016 at 10:31 AM

Wunderbar mein freund, James! Wonderful dear, James! First? Imagine the second!

James Inman

May 26, 2016 at 10:54 AM

Thank you Demetrios, actually a new poem. The contest rules required the date you join PS or the date of your first post. I didn't make that clear.

Casarah Nance

May 24, 2016 at 4:26 PM

bright colors and vocabulary :)

James Inman

May 24, 2016 at 8:23 PM

Casarah, don't know if you've experienced Chihuly glass art but I really like it, although some of it reminds me of the little drops of spittle you see if you sneeze in front of a mirror and if they were in color. lol

Gesundheit

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