Geometrics of a Corn Similar

Helmet-wearing stripe
Humanoid-cylinder slash
Ignited in lime
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Loveless Avatar
November 2, 2009 at 9:12 AM
teach me to write hakus better?? haha
Orozco Avatar
August 10, 2009 at 2:52 PM
Good image- eddie
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July 16, 2009 at 3:48 PM
The vivid imagery conveys your thoughts in a creative way. Keep on writing! Karen
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July 10, 2009 at 12:19 AM
Nice!
Devonshire Avatar
July 9, 2009 at 8:02 PM
Wow, what a creative description! Excellent haiku, Cesar! Love, Carolyn
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