Gently Now, Gently

Shriveled dreams shiver tonight your eyes shimmer with tears tainted hopes scare your heart crumbling under forgotten years I've blended mellowed lullabies in pouring stardust from above drenching your vineyard of pain in draped showers of my love
Chorus: Gently now, gently let me wrap your fingers entwined in laces I've woven a blanket of stars in clouds of fragrant traces. Gently now, gently let me caress your parched lips with mine trembling to melt frozen breath as snowflakes in dewy outline
Darling, let me be your solace in storms of anxious blue rain your halo I embrace in euphony of silk-kissed healing vervain Your unfurling petals tonight dance in soothing cuddles of light afloat Musical sandcastles orchestrate drunk moonlight for you to dote
Chorus: Gently now, gently let me wrap your fingers entwined in laces I've woven a blanket of stars in clouds of fragrant traces Gently now, gently let me caress your parched lips with mine trembling to melt frozen breath as snowflakes in dewy outline
Bridge: Let your soul dance in velvet dew we've waited for long to love again rhythms of silent hearts to flow on painted canvas of ethereal touch
Chorus: Gently now, gently let me wrap your fingers entwined in laces (Let your soul dance in velvet dew) I've woven a blanket of stars in clouds of fragrant traces (we've waited for long to love again) Gently now, gently let me caress your parched lips with mine (rhythms of silent hearts to flow) trembling to melt frozen breath as snowflakes in dewy outline (on painted canvas of ethereal touch) Gently now, gently brush my essence.. Gently now, gently my safe heaven... August 30, 2020 Pick-A-Title, Vol 22 - Lyric 2 - Poetry Contest Sponsor: Edward Ibeh Title Chosen: Gently Now, Gently
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Thacker Avatar
February 13, 2024 at 5:17 PM
Lovely song, Aditi. I love the line "I've woven a blanket of stars in clouds of fragrant traces". Very beautiful!
Andresen Avatar
September 25, 2020 at 12:48 PM
- Incredibly beautiful, Aditi - Congratulations on your top first place in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Ermine Avatar
September 25, 2020 at 6:33 AM
Massive Congratulations, Aditi!! Clearly an extremely beautiful, tangible song, conjures much romanticism and sadness. I am a fan of your song, admire the skill you have in creating it.
Watt Avatar
September 24, 2020 at 2:56 PM
You showed your musical side here so fluently, Aditi. Words that tantalize and imagery that paints a vivid story. I loved "I've blended mellowed lullabies in pouring stardust from above". Congratulations on your 1st place win, my friend.
Ibeh Avatar
September 24, 2020 at 2:25 PM
Damn! This floored me, but then again, you never fail to do so, Aditi:-) Absolutely spectacular! Congratulations on your 1st place win in my contest!
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August 30, 2020 at 4:51 PM
Hi Aditi. The images are so strong! Yours always are. I love the chorus, it sends us even deeper into the mood. Lace, parched etc. are so textural. I have the feeling you had a tune in mind while you wrote your lyrics. They're not too easy to deliver. Wonderful write!
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