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Gently Appear

A crispness floats 'pon the soft breeze Pastel color lingers Slow moving like the morn's presence Fall now gently appears A red-orange color now tips The Japanese Maple Just the young tenderest small leaves A few pears hang our staple The last rose of summer now blossomed No tender buds appear A bright golden sun arises Birds sing songs I hold dear Soon the days will be much shorter Cold will permeate the air It will be uncomfortable In my old rocking chair A feeling of fall in the air this morn..

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Daver Austin

Date: 8/27/2013 8:07:00 AM

Love your gentle end to summer. Love, daver

Sara Kendrick
Date: 8/27/2013 8:59:00 AM

Thanks Daver..Your comments are valuable..Sara

Nette Onclaud

Date: 8/26/2013 11:37:00 AM

you paint this page with wonderful hues of nature and solace, sara... impressive!..:) huggs

Jack Horne

Date: 8/26/2013 9:27:00 AM

awesome write, Sara - I especially liked the last stanza, imagining you wrapped up in your rocking chair

Ravi Sathasivam

Date: 8/26/2013 6:54:00 AM

Excellent. Beautifully written. Enjoyed. Tfs

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/26/2013 6:14:00 AM

- Sara, thank you for your beautiful poem ! Goodbye summer ... welcome autumn! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Russell Sivey

Date: 8/25/2013 7:06:00 AM

This is a lovely and wondrous write my friend! You have delighted me to no end with the autumn feel within this poem! You are very good at writing the Poulter's Measure, very superior with this form! I do enjoy reading this form, it flows so nicely! I really enjoyed reading this enlightening piece this morning! What a fantastic verse, Great Work!!