Gentle Whispers

he held me
close as one
should be

our breath shared
at that moment
we were paired

gazing outward
toward the sea
hearts free

gentle whispers
softly praise
love traced

the power of
the sea captured
within me...
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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April 17, 2012 at 9:24 PM
Sharon, its nice to share all the space and air with that one special person,,, that makes you feel all is captured with one hold in the arms..... enjoyed stopping by, have yourself a good night :-) ALWAYS ~PD
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April 17, 2012 at 2:31 PM
Charming and cute poem Sharon, like it. - oxox love Anne-Lise
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