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Gentle Sounds of Rail

There you sit and hum Here a rose petal trembles Resembling a joy There you write poem Here the bubbles of tea steam Your face and eyes gleam There you do your hair Here a bloom at the window A bridge of evening Here I in my net Try to see if any mail Gentle sounds of rail ____________________________ 2/1/2017

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Date: 1/6/2017 11:12:00 PM
Ah! Probir, nice Haiku,"I sit outside sipping my tea whilst doing my hair and waiting for the mail", I do like this one Probir, reminds me of sitting outside which Peter and I do just before summer starts while it is still nice and cool sipping on a cup of tea, thank you so much for sharing and take care,........Vera
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Probir Gupta
Date: 1/7/2017 12:33:00 AM
Thank you ... Here I write haiku/There it warms you and Peter/a nice bridge in air ...
Date: 1/5/2017 6:56:00 PM
This is indeed heavy, interference and its relation. The contrasting idea is a bomb.
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Probir Gupta
Date: 1/5/2017 7:31:00 PM
Thank you ...
Date: 1/4/2017 10:19:00 AM
Mainly 7. What a fantastic work of mind, Sir. Lovely to read this one.
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Probir Gupta
Date: 1/4/2017 7:14:00 PM
Thank you ...
Date: 1/3/2017 3:55:00 AM
Lovely haikus portaying beautiful emotions...A big 7... Happy New year...Have a great day ahead...
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Date: 1/3/2017 2:22:00 AM
Here you are again dazzling us with the beauty of Haiku' s art! A seven for each dear , Probir!
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