Gentle Sounds of Rail

There you sit and hum
Here a rose petal trembles
Resembling a joy

There you write poem
Here the bubbles of tea steam
Your face and eyes gleam

There you do your hair
Here a bloom at the window
A bridge of evening

Here I in my net
Try to see if any mail
Gentle sounds of rail
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2/1/2017
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Duggan Avatar
January 6, 2017 at 11:12 PM
Ah! Probir, nice Haiku,"I sit outside sipping my tea whilst doing my hair and waiting for the mail", I do like this one Probir, reminds me of sitting outside which Peter and I do just before summer starts while it is still nice and cool sipping on a cup of tea, thank you so much for sharing and take care,........Vera
Gupta Avatar
January 7, 2017 at 12:33 AM
Thank you ... Here I write haiku/There it warms you and Peter/a nice bridge in air ...
Lateef Avatar
January 5, 2017 at 6:56 PM
This is indeed heavy, interference and its relation. The contrasting idea is a bomb.
Gupta Avatar
January 5, 2017 at 7:31 PM
Thank you ...
Black Avatar
January 4, 2017 at 10:19 AM
Mainly 7. What a fantastic work of mind, Sir. Lovely to read this one.
Gupta Avatar
January 4, 2017 at 7:14 PM
Thank you ...
Kannan Avatar
January 3, 2017 at 3:55 AM
Lovely haikus portaying beautiful emotions...A big 7... Happy New year...Have a great day ahead...
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January 3, 2017 at 2:22 AM
Here you are again dazzling us with the beauty of Haiku' s art! A seven for each dear , Probir!
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